Six Pack

Six pack I have a six pack under my skin Problem is layer of fat Stuck between it and skin I can suck in my belly I will look pretty tin After a while my body gives in I know it is there I want it back I don’t want to give up my snacks Willpower and I disagree my six pack in me

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Kay Roberts

Date: 5/28/2017 12:28:00 PM

A lot of women prefer a keg anyway...lol. Hugs from Manchester :))

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/28/2017 1:09:00 PM

Hi Kay , lol good one :))))hugs

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/12/2017 6:19:00 PM

Great write :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/12/2017 6:47:00 PM

Hi Debbie , thanks ps don't forget to let me know about any write you would like me to see and comment :))))hugs

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/10/2017 6:06:00 PM

Lol... oh Niall you always have the jokes to make us smile and smile some more :) :) :) :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/10/2017 6:54:00 PM

Hi Akkina , makes me smile if others smile :)))hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/10/2017 2:43:00 PM

We all have a weak point...I dont smoke..nor drink...but Hey dont leave a cadbury close to me because you wont find it...Many times I do a 45mins brisk walking..so I could eat a small chocolate bar...Ha ..you yearn for salt..and I crave sugar..Enjoyed this and it made me smile.Re Ireland..-Hubby and I visited few yrs ago...Amazingly beautiful..I will visit again.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/12/2017 8:25:00 AM

Less traffic jem at sea..Yes the sea is very nice ..and even at Gozo..there are many great spots..We do spend lots of time at sea in summer...But I love to float...more than being under..lol :).Glad Dad had visited.:)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/10/2017 4:16:00 PM

Hi Charmaine , Glad you both got to see the forty shades of green over here , my father has been to Malta and Gozo many times he was a subaqua diver as am I but stopped in the last few he said it is the best place for diving,:))

Elissa Quigley

Date: 5/10/2017 2:36:00 PM

I was laughting so hard with this one. I relate with this struggle as well. Good write. Its going in my favorites as well!!

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/10/2017 4:18:00 PM

Hi Elissa , thanks it was a spor of the moment bit of fun glad you liked :)))hugs