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The wonderful story of life begins. And then came Calum... Is there any greater joy in life other than creating a new heartbeat. This is how my new grandson came to be. Four eyes sparkle Two smiles appear One conversation strikes A first date is set Another follows Six months later...still dating Happy one year anniversary Happy two year... Happy five year Finally...he kneels She accepts One year later... The rice is thrown A wonderful honeymoon One year passes Two years pass Uh oh... Cramps! Nine months pass Boom! Six eyes sparkle (Dedicated to Calum) Writing Challenge 3, July 2019-List- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart 7-29-2019

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/16/2019 5:16:00 PM

Hi Charlie: This poem was a challenge and you suceeded in defining it. CONGRATULATIONS!

Constance La France

Date: 8/12/2019 6:54:00 PM

Charles congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write

Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 9:00:00 PM

Thank you so much Constance...much appreciated :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2019 12:36:00 PM

what a wonderful way to do the list poem. You made it so special. Congrats, charles.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/9/2019 5:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/8/2019 1:21:00 PM

Grandchildren are amazing! I love how you wrote this list poem. Very creative. Congrats on your 2nd place win. Blessings, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2019 4:27:00 AM

- A cute list, Charlie :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/7/2019 5:02:00 PM

You have such an art to touch the heart, Charles! And lovely, Calum,,,ahhh! Panagiota

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/30/2019 7:49:00 PM

What a beautiful poem for your grandson! love your unique approach to this contest and the picture is adorable! You are blessed! :) hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/30/2019 10:47:00 AM

Nothing can charm me more than the endearing photo of sweet Calum and the beauty of your wondrous poem. An exquisite and touching poetic expression, my dear Charlieku. I love it and it’s a fav!! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 7/30/2019 11:03:00 AM

And congratulations on your adorable new baby grandson!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2019 2:10:00 PM

This is so sweet Charles. I bet it will do great in the contest. xxoo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/29/2019 7:24:00 AM

Wonderful! A winner for sure :)))) Good luck in the contest Charlie! xomo

Charles Messina
Date: 7/29/2019 7:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Maureen :) xocm