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For contest sponsored by Constance La France

God graciously gifted baby blue sky Rainbow rippled oil painting divine Cotton candy clouds sail like boats Against white wind where red kite floats Then majestic nights he hangs silver stars Like gold tree ornaments, planets like mars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/17/2025 6:54:00 PM
This IS truly beautiful. Reminds of the carnival-type street scenes from Ray Bradbury's 'Martian Chronicles.' (Am I dating myself or what?! lol.) I predict a winner here! ~ Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 7:32:00 PM
Thanks for the kind prediction! I’ve been reading other poet entries and know so many are so awesome! I’ll be lucky if I get an honorable mention! Lol
Date: 3/17/2025 5:25:00 PM
A wonderful entry into the contest, my friend. 6 truly beautiful lines.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 5:58:00 PM
Aw thank you Jerry!
Date: 3/17/2025 2:14:00 PM
Yes. A beauty indeed.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 2:45:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 3/16/2025 10:15:00 PM
The wonders of his creation on fine display Karen, love the imagery. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your week ahead.. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 12:35:00 AM
Thanks Tom have a blessed week yourself!

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