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Sit (Broken Hearted Rondel)

I sit. Outside your window. Mournful. Despondent. Heart has broken in twain. I feel nothing but pain. I scream your name. Silence. Dawn appears. Rosy fingers stretch across- The dew laden grass. Yet still. Outside your window. I sit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel, on your success in Brian’s “A RONDEL” contest with this intriguingly sad lyric poem. It's easy to see why you placed 2nd! Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/8/2010 9:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Great poem! -Mike
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fine verse...Margaret
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:00:00 PM
Lovely poem! Congratulations! andrea
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2010 7:42:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Daniel.Rgds Brian.My latest contest SPACES is now open
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:51:00 AM
So sad a write. I can feel those screams. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:12:00 PM
Loved the beginning and the end, very creative piece here.. each line tells a drama. Enjoy your sunday. :)
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Date: 1/23/2010 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Daniel.Rgds Brian
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