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Sister, You'Re Remarkable

You’re truly unbeatable… I’m so tired of living in fear You’re remarkable… And yet…I feel the total opposite…I wish hope would draw near… You’re truly irreplaceable… It’s so hectic outside… You’re very vigilant and I’m very irritable My eyes are sweating…I’m a coward by your side You can call it jealousy You can call me horrid names You can call it envy But, I look up to you… because you’re a better writer than I Laura, promise me you’ll be by my side I love you…though it feels like hope has dried Don’t crumble me up…consider my voice… I trust you…you’re like a best friend…but it’s your choice… To leave me behind… I know…it seems that I’m blind… I’m greedy and your beauty shines on Your writings amaze me…you are a lot of fun You’re truly amazing I’m, on the other hand, not a good enough poet You’re so fascinating And yet…I feel that we’re not on the same boat…and I know it… And that’s not all of it… You’re truly a genius It’s so cold outside…I’m freezing out here You’re very nice and full of greatness My heart is beating profoundly…I’m a loner, wandering away in fear You can call it jealousy…you can say that I’m weak But, I respect you, Laura…I love you immensely I love my whole family…they fill my heart with glee, not bleak I don’t envy you…I appreciate your sympathy Towards me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/16/2013 6:37:00 AM
Your sister Laura, is a magnificent genius of a writer and it appears to run in the family. This is a very moving and excellent write. :)
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