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Sister, Sister, Beloved Sister


Sister, sister, life would be awful without my sister,
She is my rock, the voice of reason, my safe harbour;
Not an older sibling but younger, always my anchor,
Oh, she was born with an incredible inner strength.
She possesses all the beautiful qualities of my mother,
When I am ill, it is my sister who holds my hand;
By my side she will always and forever stand,
For me she goes the distance, no matter the length.
She is my soul's deepest love and greatest strength,
I will always listen and depend on her advice;
It is full of wisdom and is usually quite concise,
Mother must be smiling down from her heavenly land.
Through all life's twists and turns we are one,
Oh, those days of childhood play until the sun was done.

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December 19, 2015


Poetry/Canzone/Sister, Sister, Beloved Sister
Copyright Protected, ID-15-736-602-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, When Older or Younger
SiblingsStep In, sponsor, Eve Roper

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 1/26/2016 9:59:00 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your awesome sibling win. XOX - LINDA -
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2016 8:54:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the awesome, love that word !
Date: 1/18/2016 8:34:00 AM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **
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Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2016 12:47:00 PM
Skat thanks for the congratulations and the lovely
Date: 1/16/2016 11:29:00 PM
Very well written BW. You were blessed to have a sister like this. Congrats on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2016 6:10:00 AM
Scott thanks so much for the congratulations and yes I am blessed for sure, she is everything to me since our parents have passed away, I will never forget us standing hand in hand in front of those coffins, sisters united in grief and love ~
Date: 1/16/2016 8:46:00 AM
So heartfelt and such a beautiful tribute to your dear sister, BW. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2016 2:49:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for much for the beautiful, the congratulations and the 7!
Date: 1/15/2016 7:30:00 PM
Very wonderful tribute to your sister Broken Wings...Congrats...*smiles*-luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2016 8:08:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the wonderful, the congrats, and the smiles ~
Date: 1/15/2016 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the win with this wonderful tribute to your sister.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2016 5:52:00 PM
Susan, thanks for the wonderful and the congratulations ~
Date: 1/15/2016 5:21:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2016 5:53:00 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the congrats and the hugs !
Date: 1/15/2016 4:33:00 PM
Broken Wing, congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. A wonderful tribute to your sister, a bond of love that has been there always for both of you. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2016 4:38:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for a great contest and for my incredible placement ~
Date: 1/15/2016 4:22:00 PM
well quilled, constance.. big congrats on your win.. huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2016 4:38:00 PM
Nette, I love that word quilled, and thanks for the congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 12/21/2015 1:49:00 PM
This is so damn beautiful poem my dear so much emotions and passion in there a true honest relationship....what a spectacular write really...hugs and merry Christmas for you and all of ur beloved one's....// :)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/21/2015 2:11:00 PM
Oh Dalia what a wonderful comment, thank you so much
Date: 12/19/2015 5:37:00 PM
that was soooo Beautiful and sincere....by the passion in these words, the Love you two share is clear....I Love my brothers so much, guess that's why I fight with them the hardest....after all, it is because of them so many people think I am the smartest....;)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2015 11:40:00 PM
Eric, that's funny about your brothers, me and my sister have had our disagreements for sure, but that never changed the love, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 12/19/2015 10:55:00 AM
You are so blessed Broken Wings - I will have to think long and hard about even writing for this contest:-( hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2015 3:40:00 PM
what a delightful picture too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2015 3:38:00 PM
Jan, thanks so much for your visit, yes, I am blessed ~
Date: 12/19/2015 9:54:00 AM
Having a younger sister made this read personal. I adore it, the emotion is straight on, as is the love and appreciation. I'm putting this in my favs - I am all the better for having read this - that happens at times and it is awesome when it does ... CayCay - 7
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Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2015 3:40:00 PM
CayCay, oh thanks so much for that lovely comment and for faving my poem and for the 7, appreciate !!
Date: 12/19/2015 8:54:00 AM
Lovely....I'm so glad that you are blessed with a younger sister who is such a pillar in your life. I have two older brothers... Hugs, my dear.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2015 3:42:00 PM
CayCay, that is like my younger sister, she always seems to be the older, people think that and that gets her so angry, but I think it is that inner strength that she projects ~~
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/19/2015 9:57:00 AM
I have to tell you, BW - I am 7 years older than my sister yet since she was a teenager, people have thought her the older. That changed only within the past years. Mine has my Father's willpower and strength. We blend familiar, but are each differently blessed. Great dialogue - couldn't resist sharing.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2015 9:14:00 AM
Eileen, thanks for the nice comment, my older sister passed away when we were kids, even before this sister was born, I always seemed more fragile than my younger sister, she was truly born with incredible inner strength, just like my mother possessed. We look very similar even being mistaken for twins, just yesterday even, oh she hates that, afterall she is younger!!!
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