Sir Punt

The Garden of Eden had a snake
That slithered around when on the make
It found that Eve
Fit like a sleeve
'til Adam's apple snagged the mistake
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Gorelick Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Glad you "shed" some light on their story! Always witty never dull!
Anaya Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Snapple anyone? Lol, rico
Hawkins Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:18 PM
Sir Punt, The Snake Adam's apple ate. Very humourous, witty and clever. Thank you, Rico. Still smiling, Old Duck
George Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 9:52 PM
Oh my.... thiis is terrific ! Your stock never exhausts, dear Rico ! Keep on entertaining us.....
Leffanta Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Who could imagine a Garden of Eden without snakes? Aloha!
Volumes Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 3:17 PM
The great thing is you have over 2000 years of subject matter to fill your wonderful limericks. We will never be tired of seeing what masterpieces you come up with next. Love this one.
Leffanta Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:44 AM
With so many scriptures, who needs a muse? Aloha!
Bauer Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 2:18 PM
Another gem, Rico!
Leffanta Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:44 AM
Mahalo, Ilene! Aloha!
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