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Sinless Eyes - a Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

SINLESS EYES - a collab with JAMES FRASER SINLESS EYES Nine solid months unto her womb is he, breathing and heartbeat they do as one. Carrying him safely, his husband sees, providing food and money his daily home run 'til the day his son pleas to be out in the sun. (always then his aim is to be a good guy) Though it will take a long long time, his son-- sinless eyes, no smiles, when the children cry... His son grew then unto the world he spree where he is exposed to gases, bombs and gun. Along the streets, he and others learn a key-- that learning curve adhere but some remains undone. Shoulders bruised, torn, from bearing a tonne, some lost souls wander, their life gone awry-- falling short to wonder later how it all began, sinless eyes, no smiles, when the children cry... Can later bestow some better decree, outlasting evil by following a model-- a nun? On returning to God by following thee, from this day, forward, man shall never shun to battles that last even 'til midnight sun. Answers possessed on the strings of whys and never again to ask for a hired gun. Sinless eyes, no smiles, when the children cry... Darkness is beaten, light has won! Wisdom now reached, cocooning the guy, a new day now welcomes another son sinless eyes, no smiles, when the children cry... ©O. E. Guillermo and J.A. Fraser 9:40 pm, December 01, 2014

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Date: 12/7/2014 9:56:00 AM
A truly great and deep co-write my friends! I had to put on my thinking cap as I read this one. So many layers to it and this thought emerged. The corruption of the soul starts immediately after the baby takes its first breath... For it just left safety and warmth to enter a cold and cruel , sinful world. Solid 7 and congrats on a great write you guys..
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James Fraser
Date: 12/27/2014 2:32:00 PM
Hiya Robert, apologies for the late reply, also a belated Happy Christmas to you and yours. Thanks for the kind words. May I take this opportunity to wish you a Healthy New Year, James :)
Date: 12/5/2014 12:47:00 AM
Oh wow Masterful write James! Its thoughtful and deep!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/5/2014 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Upma, with the wonderful input by Olive, it makes this piece the more richer, with sadness. I'm blessed to write with such a talent, and she'll get stronger as a poet/writer. Have a most lovely weekend, James :)
Date: 12/4/2014 5:10:00 PM
I found this so so deep dark and sad - great write Olive and James:-) Hugs jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 12/5/2014 12:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. One of the tracks it's based on is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iAFH2_3o-oo by White Lion. It's a joy to write with Olive, with more to follow as the weeks, months pass. Have a blessed weekend, hugs from James xx

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