Sinkhole

A sinkhole, deep as 20 feet,
Collapsed without a warning,
Around the corner from my street
Quite early in the morning.

Repair crews came but no one knows
What caused the sudden sinking.
Decrepitude, some folks suppose,
But not what we were thinking.

Ineptitude’s what we would blame,
For workers have been toiling 
On that same block where they became 
The source of tempers roiling.

They somehow cannot seem to fix
What underground befuddles,
So residents have had a mix
Of flames, closed streets and puddles.

Our car was parked right down the block
Where that huge hole descended.
It would have come as quite a shock
If that’s how my life ended.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 4:12 PM
I am glad you and your car escaped this " residents have had a mix Of flames, closed streets and puddles." Wow! I have seen photos of these, and they are seriously serious.
Leffanta Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 11:30 AM
A sinkhole was my first thought on hearing about the Surfside Condo, but would be an even greater disaster in Manhattan! I hope the noise woke up your god! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 6:25 PM
how shocking and scary Ilene, so glad you are all ok:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Oh my! That's scary! Stay safe, Ilene! Florida gets sinkholes, too. Fortunately I've never been around one. Enjoyed your poem! Blessings, Kim M
Hankins Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Oh, wow! I can't imagine. Your poem is so well-written with marvelous rhymes. I hope they determine a cause so appropriate action can be taken. Seems you were lucky!
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