Sing No Canticle For Me

I hardly noticed the first tiny crack, 
through the deluge of tears I cried.
Perhaps too numb to feel the sting of pain
or the fissure exposing my wounded heart,
but in sorrow, I chose to ignore it 
in the futile hope that it would heal itself.
 
Adversity seldom vanishes of its own accord.
The cause of my anxiety increased tenfold
as larger pieces of me fractured and snapped.
My fragility was as bare as my soul,
both unprotected and vulnerable.
Wounds no bandage could cover or conceal.
 
My exterior had become a brittle shell, 
falling around me in sharp edged shards.  
The obvious camouflaged the obscure. 
I had to be brave if I was going to heal.

I wanted no Humpty Dumpty Canticle
sung by pitying voices on my behalf. 
The wall I once climbed no longer held me up
but I had learned to restrain my weakness
and the need to lean upon it as a crutch. 

I motioned for the King's men to mount
and continue along on their journey. 
If I was to be rescued, I swore to do it myself.

Carefully, I gathered each shattered fragment,
every crushed dream that had been broken. 
I nurtured my wounds until my lamenting heart
stopped bleeding as we hobbled our way home 
to be made whole once more.



January 6, 2023
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 24
Sponsored by Mark Toney
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Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Lin, truly you have written of the journey of the healing heart in stunning images that drew me into your vulnerable, exposed heart then left me in your healing oasis. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Lane Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Thank you for acknowledging my poem, Sam. It was an expose' written nearly 7 years ago. All is well in my world not.
Toney Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 1:54 PM
Lin, this is an intriguing poem about overcoming adversity through self-reliance. Your word choice is brilliant. Congratulations on your win on Mile 24 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Two more miles to run before the Qualifier's Final Placement Contest!
Lane Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Thank you, Mark.
Logan Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 7:04 AM
I know you dedicated the rest of the marathon to Milt's honor, but he would've frowned at choosing poems about him over honoring the best composed entries. I know you and I haven't always seen eye to eye, but I know how Milt would've felt about this.
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Just noticed I had never listed you as a followed poet. Sorry about that!! I really need time to update my lists here!!
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May 24, 2017 at 7:19 PM
wow, Lin, this one of yours is AMAZING! BIG congrats on a well deserved win. I am faving this one!
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