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Sing a Sad Song

May I sit with you and sing a sad song? A final chorus about what was wrong Twixt you and I. Oh, it hurts so much to know I will miss your loving touch. Our flaws and faults allow for crying. My spirit is in anguish and slowly dying. My soul is torn and drowning in fright. This ballad is too hard to sing tonight. I'd spin words of a magical incantation and fill our mugs with drafts of libation if I thought it was in my hands to do so, but our passion is as cold as falling snow. What was it that finally did us both in? My world is dark. I'm in constant chagrin. You and I had so many ups and downs and now our parting has us clad in frowns I should walk away from you in this rain cuz my vision is swimming with liquid pain. I'll go, but first I must say that I was wrong to think I could finish singing this sad song. June 6, 2021 Emile Pinet's Lipogram Contest I have omitted the vowel 'e'

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Date: 6/30/2021 8:21:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 6/30/2021 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win with this emotional poem. Many can relate to this.
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Date: 6/30/2021 12:14:00 PM
Such an emotional piece Jenna, sadly it is something many can relate to in life:-(many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2021 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jenna! Your sorrowful poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 46 poems entered, and your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placement my friend, great work, Emile.
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Date: 6/7/2021 5:46:00 AM
I can relate to your words in this sad poem Jenna. It is compassionately composed. Blessings xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2021 10:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Connie. I hope you stay close to your friends here. We need your poetry. Hugs.
Date: 6/7/2021 2:34:00 AM
I can tell the pain and emotion within this verse, Jenna, nicely written. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2021 4:38:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, John. Happy to see you.
Date: 6/6/2021 7:17:00 PM
Poignant and pretty, Jenna. Fine poesy! ~ Gershon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2021 4:38:00 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts.
Date: 6/6/2021 8:21:00 AM
Partings are always a painful experience but sometimes its for the best. You composed this well Jenna, no 'e' not easy to do finding alternative words. Hope your day going well, im just back, been out with the family to a wildlife park, had a great day. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2021 9:05:00 AM
It is difficult, Tom. Even when I thought I was 'e' free, there were a few. Thanks for reading me. I'm sure your wildlife adventure was lots of fun!
Date: 6/6/2021 8:11:00 AM
Wish it were a joyful song. Suits you better. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2021 9:03:00 AM
I recently had news that left me in a morose mood. I'm sure that's why my sadness is lending itself to morose poetry. Thank you very much Victor.

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