Sinful Desires 2

Before I obliterate my life
               Let me drink the wine of passion
               before the shadow falls 
               until the night calls 
                Let me shed all my inhibition 
               Remove all the layers
                of my immodest desires.
                The heat from you 
                struck my heart like a wild fire
                Let me Love you again     
                with unbridled devotion



This is my work nearly after two years...I hope , I can justify my presence again..!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/1/2016 9:52:00 AM
This I believe to be much deeper than the original, about more than just the passion of the body.
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:56:00 PM
unashamedly wonderful!
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:19:00 AM
You definitely justify your presence with presents like that, like passion and wine you improve over time.
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:45:00 AM
Both your desire to love and to start writing again are attached to the heart...let your emotions lead the way! [ps...read several of your poems...very positively impressed!] ~ Regards // paul
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/26/2016 2:58:00 AM
Thank you so much paul!
Date: 2/24/2016 2:00:00 AM
Yep! You're back in...;0) hugs Rick.
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/26/2016 2:58:00 AM
:)
Date: 2/23/2016 11:25:00 PM
Hi Red, You don't know how nice it is to see you post after all this time. I thank you for visiting my poems a few days ago. It was a nice feeling to see you here. About your poem: I am thrilled to read this kind of desire. The sinful desire sounds irresistible. :) Well done on the steamy need of unbridled devotion... Hugs. LINDA
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/23/2016 11:27:00 PM
Hi Red, I bet Richard L, will be glad to see this new one from you. I read a few of your last poems from two years ago. I noticed he was a reader of your poems... Good night. LINDA
Date: 2/23/2016 8:24:00 AM
Definitely felt that!
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/23/2016 10:58:00 PM
thank you !
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