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Sinful Bleed-Ing Disorder

Sinful minds bleeding- profusely. Seek a hysteroscope from Above. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 0510-2012

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/21/2013 2:22:00 PM

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I love love love brevity and how so much can be said with so few words. I am unaccustomed to this style, but I like it. Very interesting. Thanks for a great read! :)

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/5/2012 8:54:00 PM

Minds bleeding profusely? Wow! So much said in so few words. Powerful!!

Bertha Davis

Date: 7/26/2012 9:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing and encouraging

Carma Sanderson

Date: 6/1/2012 11:29:00 PM

So very true This one is. ;B

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/2/2012 12:24:00 AM

Yes maam indeed it is!!

Peggy Caulfield

Date: 5/24/2012 6:54:00 AM

This one is interesting - a hysteroscope from above. You are passing some good ideas on.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/24/2012 9:09:00 AM

Lol..I tried to be a bit different!!! All smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2012 9:35:00 PM

oh this is cool today. How did I miss it before?

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/15/2012 10:52:00 PM

Lol...I'm not even sure!! Hugs

Joi Murphy

Date: 5/15/2012 6:18:00 PM

guidance!!!!!! I like it

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/15/2012 6:28:00 PM

Thank you!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2012 8:51:00 AM

Interesting way of putting the idea..Yes, when one is encrusted with sin that one needs to meet the Savior..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/12/2012 9:23:00 AM

Thank you and you are so very welcome madam!!

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/12/2012 7:27:00 AM

You have done so well here! I remember the first poetry I read of yours, a definite favorite. Rock on with you bad arse pen! Cindy Lu AKA Lucinda

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/12/2012 9:22:00 AM

Thanks you sooo much!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2012 5:56:00 AM

New man in P-Soup - Tell him that I like this haiku, and he is welcome to read some of mine poem Pace,G - Love Anne-Lise :)+ :=)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/12/2012 6:18:00 AM

Lol..ok I will...Thanks Anne!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/12/2012 5:47:00 AM

Very nice G... such wisdom in your words. very enjoyed.... Michael

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/12/2012 6:19:00 AM

Thank you sir!!!

John Rhinem

Date: 5/12/2012 12:32:00 AM

Smile ˜ Quite Compelling & Yet Injected With A Bit Of Humour Also, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful GPac * Made Me Think Of Jack Nicholson In One Flew Over The Cookoos Nest ˜ Also, Thank You For The Kind Visit; Very Lovely ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/12/2012 2:20:00 AM

Simply love your comments John!!! Smiles

Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2012 11:20:00 AM

ouch...nicely done G...

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/11/2012 12:14:00 PM

Thanks Joseph!!

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/10/2012 2:55:00 PM

Bravo! It isn't a tournequet that's needed to stop it...no quick fix...complete removal of the problem!! And by the only one who can fix it! Well Done!! Pace! Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/11/2012 12:14:00 PM

Smiles..Thank you Deborah!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/10/2012 10:59:00 AM

Good one Pace,enjoyed.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/10/2012 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Kash!!!

David Williams

Date: 5/10/2012 10:22:00 AM

Pace I like it ..David

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/10/2012 11:10:00 AM

Thank you David!!