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Since you have washed over me

Since you have washed over me ~ Drifting on a meandering stream where clover dance and ripples direct my thoughts to the promises of a new day I dream I am floating in your arms as currents gently tug playing solitaire in wishing hands among glistening diamonds on the surface I search for each desire’s realm while my eyes wander to a place long of sunrise sparklings on soft apricot murmurs Finding your fragrance on a cool wind’s whisper my heart is drenched, cleansed in an endless channel of what your beauty brings to me I rest in a shady spot among watercolor shadows writing poetry, penning my affections in ink traced lines, renderings of how wonderful my life is Since you have washed over me leaving me breathless, submerged far beneath dew drop shimmers, saturated by your love Good night Soupers

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Date: 11/8/2018 1:05:00 PM
Hello Chris, oh this is such a beautifully written poem. It left me with a deep sigh. have a nice evening my friend. Peace,Love,Joy.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 10/23/2018 5:51:00 AM
A great romantic piece my friend. A true pleasure to read this exceptional verse this fine morn! Congratulations on POTD honors given.. A fav..
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert
Date: 10/19/2018 7:02:00 AM
Hi Chris, congratulations on your Poem Of The Day, with this excellent piece. It is much deserved. Have a wonderful Friday.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so very much
Date: 10/18/2018 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on POTD the romance king pulls off another beauty!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much John
Date: 10/17/2018 3:04:00 AM
Congrats Nick on this piece being the POTD, It was a really good fun piece, really enjoyed it. Have a great day, Gordon
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thanks so very much Gordon. I am thrilled you liked it.
Date: 10/17/2018 12:24:00 AM
This is my kind of poetry Chris! It is dreamy and romantic and raises ones spirit to a higher elevation draped in your lovely poetic words. Congratulations on POTD! A well deserved honor! : ) xxoo Connie
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie. I always look forward to your visits.
Date: 10/16/2018 5:14:00 PM
Wow, that was beautifully romantic with great imagery; great expression and that flow is like hot butter rolling over a freshly baked biscuit. No wonder it's a POTD! Congrats!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 5:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment on my poem.
Date: 10/16/2018 2:28:00 PM
Oh my oh my! This poem deserves a big WOW! What a beauty, Chris! A great POTD...and a fav for me.
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Date: 10/16/2018 1:41:00 PM
Clapping for you in Virginia ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thanks a bunch CayCay
Date: 10/16/2018 11:42:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on POTD.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thanks so very much.
Date: 10/16/2018 11:38:00 AM
It sounds like you have found your inspiration. Perhaps she feels your words, if not- she will as they drift along the wind. As they find her heart. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thank you so very much Brandy for your kind and encouraging words. I am thrilled you enjoyed this
Date: 10/16/2018 11:25:00 AM
beautifully penned romantic poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 10/16/2018 10:35:00 AM
Gorgeous, lovely, lilting romantic free verse. Congratulations, Chris, on POTD...It could well be POTY (Poem of the Year)! Best wishes, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kindness. I appreciate you wonderful comment.
Date: 10/16/2018 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Chris. Sounds a whole lot like love:)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Daniel. It's from memory. : )
Date: 10/16/2018 9:59:00 AM
I missed this one somehow. One of your best. Congratulations!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 10:26:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 10/16/2018 9:54:00 AM
Stunning! CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 10/16/2018 9:06:00 AM
Chris, congratulation on this great imagery and romantic POTD!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 9:47:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve.
Date: 10/16/2018 9:06:00 AM
Lovely piece Chris, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Charlie. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/16/2018 9:01:00 AM
Spectacular! display of emotions, Chris...Congrats!!! on your POTD! my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thanks my friend. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 10/16/2018 8:37:00 AM
Swoonworthy awesomeness ;) Congrats on POTD! xomo <3
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 10/16/2018 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Chris. Well done.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thanks Warren. I appreciate your kind thoughts
Date: 10/16/2018 7:52:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Chris :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 10/16/2018 7:21:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats on POTD - wish I could have a favourites favorite section I adore this poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much again Jan
Date: 10/16/2018 6:20:00 AM
Coming back with congrats on POTD!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thanks again Agnes
Date: 10/16/2018 6:02:00 AM
Congrats Chris on poem of the day..excellent poetry.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much.
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