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Since You Have Washed Over Me

Since you have washed over me
~

Drifting on a meandering stream
where clover dance and ripples direct my thoughts
to the promises of a new day

I dream I am floating in your arms

as currents gently tug
playing solitaire in wishing hands
among glistening diamonds on the surface

I search for each desire’s realm

while my eyes wander to a place
long of sunrise sparklings
on soft apricot murmurs

Finding your fragrance on a cool wind’s whisper

my heart is drenched,
cleansed in an endless channel
of what your beauty brings to me

I rest in a shady spot among watercolor shadows

writing poetry,
penning my affections in ink traced lines,
renderings of how wonderful my life is

Since you have washed over me

leaving me breathless,
submerged far beneath dew drop shimmers,
saturated by your love

Good night Soupers

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/8/2018 1:05:00 PM

Hello Chris, oh this is such a beautifully written poem. It left me with a deep sigh. have a nice evening my friend. Peace,Love,Joy.

Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2018 1:09:00 PM

Thank you so very much Darlene. I am happy you liked it.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/23/2018 5:51:00 AM

A great romantic piece my friend. A true pleasure to read this exceptional verse this fine morn! Congratulations on POTD honors given.. A fav..

Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 8:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Robert

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/19/2018 7:02:00 AM

Hi Chris, congratulations on your Poem Of The Day, with this excellent piece. It is much deserved. Have a wonderful Friday.

Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so very much

John Hamilton

Date: 10/18/2018 8:59:00 AM

Congrats on POTD the romance king pulls off another beauty!

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2018 9:13:00 AM

Thanks so much John

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/17/2018 3:04:00 AM

Congrats Nick on this piece being the POTD, It was a really good fun piece, really enjoyed it. Have a great day, Gordon

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2018 8:45:00 AM

Thanks so very much Gordon. I am thrilled you liked it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/17/2018 12:24:00 AM

This is my kind of poetry Chris! It is dreamy and romantic and raises ones spirit to a higher elevation draped in your lovely poetic words. Congratulations on POTD! A well deserved honor! : ) xxoo Connie

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2018 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so very much Connie. I always look forward to your visits.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/16/2018 5:14:00 PM

Wow, that was beautifully romantic with great imagery; great expression and that flow is like hot butter rolling over a freshly baked biscuit. No wonder it's a POTD! Congrats!

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 5:23:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment on my poem.

Carole Duet

Date: 10/16/2018 2:28:00 PM

Oh my oh my! This poem deserves a big WOW! What a beauty, Chris! A great POTD...and a fav for me.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/16/2018 1:41:00 PM

Clapping for you in Virginia ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 2:46:00 PM

Thanks a bunch CayCay

Marilyn Williams

Date: 10/16/2018 11:42:00 AM

Wonderful poem and congrats on POTD.

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 2:46:00 PM

Thanks so very much.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/16/2018 11:38:00 AM

It sounds like you have found your inspiration. Perhaps she feels your words, if not- she will as they drift along the wind. As they find her heart. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 2:46:00 PM

Thank you so very much Brandy for your kind and encouraging words. I am thrilled you enjoyed this