Ken Carroll Poet Free verse

Sin Eater

How does it feel?
when I kneel
we make love
and confess all our sins...

Anoited in our sins
embodiment of our sins
rare gold in color
we always want more...

We sin of lust
swirl in amber
my tongue
licking your flesh...

Midnight wrath
we kiss
we coil
in a fit of redden anger....

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Liam Mcdaid October 25, 2014 at 12:18 AM powerful piece of writing buddy always a pleasure reading your pieces pal

Maurice Yvonne September 22, 2014 at 6:01 PM Explosive is right. Great write.

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2014 at 10:25 PM I like the originality of this one. gosh, it ended in red anger!!! I liked best the third little stanza. Ken Carroll September 20, 2014 at 10:36 PM Thank you Andrea..The ending was intended to be explosive..lol

Eileen Manassian September 20, 2014 at 5:34 PM You've been gone a while, Ken. Good to have you back. Sensual as usual...bold! Very bold! Ken Carroll September 20, 2014 at 10:34 PM Thank you Eileen..Good to read from you as well!

Sebastian Aaron Baez September 20, 2014 at 4:33 PM Scorching hot words Ken! Genius stuff! The title was catchy and the was poem was awesome and refreshing to read. Ken Carroll September 20, 2014 at 4:54 PM Thank you Sebastian!