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Sin Eater

How does it feel? when I kneel we make love and confess all our sins... Anoited in our sins embodiment of our sins rare gold in color we always want more... We sin of lust swirl in amber my tongue licking your flesh... Midnight wrath we kiss we coil in a fit of redden anger....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/25/2014 12:18:00 AM
powerful piece of writing buddy always a pleasure reading your pieces pal
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Date: 9/22/2014 6:01:00 PM
Explosive is right. Great write.
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Date: 9/20/2014 10:25:00 PM
I like the originality of this one. gosh, it ended in red anger!!! I liked best the third little stanza.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2014 10:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..The ending was intended to be explosive..lol
Date: 9/20/2014 5:34:00 PM
You've been gone a while, Ken. Good to have you back. Sensual as usual...bold! Very bold!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2014 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Eileen..Good to read from you as well!
Date: 9/20/2014 4:33:00 PM
Scorching hot words Ken! Genius stuff! The title was catchy and the was poem was awesome and refreshing to read.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2014 4:54:00 PM
Thank you Sebastian!

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