Sin

Success In Nonsense Separation Inherited Naturally Satan’s Internal Nature Swimming In Nothingness

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Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 7/13/2010 10:18:00 AM

We all Sin, but my sins seem so much worse! Great write though, I heard you were pretty good. Thanks for the comment on my Another Birthday! Check out Regret River

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/13/2010 7:06:00 AM

We are all sinner in what way however, Adeleke! Well written and thank you for commenting my work!...We have "African Temperatures" here right now (high tempeartures and high humidity)...Have anice week!...Keep your ideas flowing!!! ...Gert

Date: 7/9/2010 2:12:00 PM

Amen! Creative way to convey the message. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for the birthday greeting. Have a good weekend. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2010 1:14:00 PM

Do what u need to Adeleke but do not stop writing or creating verses to share with us.. it is your gift.. u are our gift.. remember that on your life's path to where God leads u to go.. with luv.. S.M..

David Byrne

Date: 7/8/2010 7:31:00 PM

read somewhere that sin was missing the mark, interesting!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2010 3:37:00 PM

Hope all is well A.A. .. am leaving tomorrow for home.. long 17 hour flight... enter some of the contests.. some new ones posted.. good luck.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Marie Harrison

Date: 7/7/2010 8:03:00 PM

Wow, my fav was separation inherited naturally. Great acrostic poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/7/2010 1:24:00 PM

BTW...your collaboration poem with Tirzah is magnificent on friendship.. luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/7/2010 1:24:00 PM

A wonderful Acrostic with beautiful message.. Adeleke... I havve been very busy trying to get everything together for trip home.. hope u understand ..cannot spend too much time on Soup till I get home again.. hope u don't stay away too long.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" .. AlohA..