Sin

We all Sin, but my sins seem so much worse! Great write though, I heard you were pretty good. Thanks for the comment on my Another Birthday! Check out Regret River

We are all sinner in what way however, Adeleke! Well written and thank you for commenting my work!...We have "African Temperatures" here right now (high tempeartures and high humidity)...Have anice week!...Keep your ideas flowing!!! ...Gert

Amen! Creative way to convey the message. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for the birthday greeting. Have a good weekend. Karen

Do what u need to Adeleke but do not stop writing or creating verses to share with us.. it is your gift.. u are our gift.. remember that on your life's path to where God leads u to go.. with luv.. S.M..

read somewhere that sin was missing the mark, interesting!

Hope all is well A.A. .. am leaving tomorrow for home.. long 17 hour flight... enter some of the contests.. some new ones posted.. good luck.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Wow, my fav was separation inherited naturally. Great acrostic poem.

BTW...your collaboration poem with Tirzah is magnificent on friendship.. luv..

A wonderful Acrostic with beautiful message.. Adeleke... I havve been very busy trying to get everything together for trip home.. hope u understand ..cannot spend too much time on Soup till I get home again.. hope u don't stay away too long.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" .. AlohA..

Hey, four acrostics in one there, Adeleke! The last two I thought were the very best descriptions of sin! Luv, andrea

Wonderfully Originally Written :)

like the last bit!

This was a very nicely done acrostic. The words are very powerful. Thank you also for your kinds words.

Great acrostics. I am reading more of your poems to try to know you better. Love, Joyce

Double wow, I absolutely love this Adeleke, tc Wilma

Wow! A superb quadruple acrostic. Each verse is outstanding, Adeleke. Great work! Love, Carolyn