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Simplicity

There's such a simple thing as sitting on the porch
Where summer rose of Sharon leaves overhang the rail
I'm relaxed on our old fashioned swing    made of slats
Where a fine grey and white    stray    kitty cat has adopted us
He prances gracefully    and now and then rubs my legs with his
    tail
Looking off    I wonder at the avenue of great old trees
They rise sky high    lean to meet each other over the street
Weather   thus far    has been hot to mild
Today is mild
I'm thinking....why don't I spend more time like this.....
Why doesn't everyone spend more time like this?
There is a pot of mixed flowers sitting on the post by the  
    stairs    and
One or two early blossoms have burst out on the rose of Sharon
    tree
The house next door has flowered nicely at the side
The street    so far as I can see    is spotted with fine bloom
Now a gentle breeze sweeps in    just barely spreads and
    soothes my hair
Yes    this is pure luxury    pure ecstasy
Simplicity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/14/2010 12:45:00 PM
What a dreamy and softly whispered poem. I love this momentary escape...like sitting on a front porch of a big old house, and drinking in the day. Nicely done, Daver!! Thanks for this little escape! :)
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:53:00 PM
Daver, just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. I like the artistic presentation. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:12:00 PM
Congrats Daver on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:07:00 PM
another one very very lovely. Is it one of your favorites as well? I love seeing the trees in bloom. It always happens here right around the middle of April and by now, my blooms have finished. Luv, Andrea ps when you floated, was it an out of body experience. I almost felt one time like i was on the verge of one of those. that would be the ultimate!
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Date: 8/3/2008 5:43:00 AM
Amazing in its truth and beauty. Well, I sure know why I don't spend more (or any) alone time like that - 5 kids! lol Although, we enjoy nature together, but that sweet, full vaporous alone time is as precious as gold. Beautiful! Kristin XO
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Date: 7/28/2008 12:34:00 PM
Yes, we do need to spend more time like this. Life has gotten so fast paced. Such a peaceful feel to your poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/27/2008 9:20:00 AM
Hi Daver A beautiful well written poem. I feel like I'm right there with you on the porch taking in the beautiful scent of the rose of sharon tree,along with the neighborhood view. Enjoyed! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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