Simple Words of Love

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No need for a special day
to adorn you with affection.

For when love had forgotten me,
you arrived during Spring's bloom,
floating like a petal from the heavens.

I can remember Whispers from tepid winds, 
led me to willow trees, bowing to your grace.
I still remember crystal clarion blue skies,
an eternal reminder of our first glance,
and the enchantment in your eyes.

But you say:

"The pen needs no metaphors,
just write simple words of love."

The pen flows like simple musing streams;
(oops a metaphor)

So, here goes in the most simplest words.
You are the answers to those questions I could not find.
What my heart yearned for in others, it found in you.
No confusion remained, as suppressed emotions flowed.
Your whole existence was conveyed through my poetry .

How I wish to forever stay in that moment,
the first time our love turned into reality.
Without speaking a word, 
my heart felt like we were not strangers.

You're still the one, only you.
The one who knows, the one who understands.
With you stormy seas calm and all that is lost is found.
With you in the world, nothing else matters.
I can't say it simpler..... Than I am Yours.

Silent One
Simple Musings
14 February 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/17/2018 10:26:00 PM
From Brian Adams' song... Straight from the heart! So beautiful, just what a lady would love to hear from her beloved!
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Silent One
Date: 3/18/2018 10:28:00 AM
Glad you liked these simple words Kina..
Date: 2/25/2018 3:55:00 PM
Heartfelt write that would leave anyone with happy tears...simply beautiful
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Silent One
Date: 3/18/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Melissa..
Date: 2/23/2018 7:22:00 PM
Looks like this was a Valentines' Day post and very worthy of that day! Lovely.
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Date: 2/19/2018 5:15:00 PM
No need to say if it's good or not  I'm fine with how it makes me feel,  A warm feeling came over me
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Date: 2/15/2018 5:46:00 PM
Oh, this is just beautiful, Silent! Your words convey such devotion and emotion for your loved one! How touching, and your metaphors are simply beautiful! Happy Belated Valentines Day :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/16/2018 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Laura..
Date: 2/15/2018 9:14:00 AM
A very beautiful write, it s strange na that just with someone s presence how our whole life is change, we started to enjoy the things that we were once used to hate, a very nice poem in simple words, without any metaphor you have explained all this really beautifully, good luck and yeah " do see my soupmail "
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Silent One
Date: 2/15/2018 3:10:00 PM
There is nothing like being with the one you love and sometimes you have to tell them in simple ways.. Thank you Faraz..
Date: 2/15/2018 12:23:00 AM
Different. Nice and free.
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Silent One
Date: 2/15/2018 3:01:00 PM
Danke..
Date: 2/15/2018 12:19:00 AM
Very touching reminder of love. Happy Valentines Day ~~:)) Pat
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Silent One
Date: 2/15/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Patricia..
Date: 2/14/2018 4:57:00 PM
Silent, oh I love your simple musings, this is beautiful beyond words !
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Silent One
Date: 2/15/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you BW..
Date: 2/14/2018 3:58:00 PM
Simply lovely SO, you leave nothing to doubt with this lovely write...
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Charlie..
Date: 2/14/2018 10:46:00 AM
Deep evocation of love, SO! The last line says it all. Liked the humorous innocent oops, falling head over heels in love does that to a person. A very tender romantic offering for V-Day. Love and best wishes always.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thank you Freddie, we have all been there..
Date: 2/14/2018 9:58:00 AM
Good morning dear friend!!! You are absolutely right about not needing a special day! Love is eternal!!! Cheers, your eternal friend, Happy Jack!!!
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:38:00 PM
Hello my friend, hope you are well.. Thank you for your visit..
Date: 2/14/2018 9:49:00 AM
wow. I love the honesty in your words, and the expression of emotion. I think this is the kind of "valentine" every woman would love to get from her man.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:38:00 PM
Been a while since I got a wow from you... Thank you for the lovely compliment..
Date: 2/14/2018 9:36:00 AM
'You're still the one, only you. The one who knows, the one who understands.' That sums up how it is when someone recognises the unspoken signs that mean 'I love you so much' or, 'I need a hug, please.' Both in equal amounts; of course, from either side. Takes patience to wait til time brings such amazing love: a skin that fits outside your own, a heart that seems to tick at the same speed. It's not magic, it just IS. Your finely written poem says as much - and more. Brava! -
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, was trying my best not to say the i love your words...
Date: 2/14/2018 8:33:00 AM
This is so heartfelt and amazingly romantic! Such a beautiful tribute to your loved one. Very, very touching write for Valentine's Day!
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Judy..
Date: 2/14/2018 8:11:00 AM
A Valentine's gift for sure, Silent One. Anyone fortunate enough to have experienced anything near to your love letter is lucky indeed!!
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Mike
Date: 2/14/2018 8:11:00 AM
WoW! Silent, Saying this is romantic is an understatement because "is" and so much more. I found it to be poetic with good content. Good metaphors as well. I'm so glad I read this on today. Happy Valentine's Day my friend:-) Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Alexis.. Glad you liked this simple poem..
Date: 2/14/2018 7:29:00 AM
Sweet words straight from the heart. Simply and beautifully expressed Si, a fave....Maria
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Maria..
Date: 2/14/2018 7:26:00 AM
The last three stanzas speak to and from heart..a poem very apt for the day, lovingly depicted. Choice words to make a loved-one feel special..well done, Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 2/14/2018 7:15:00 AM
Wow - awesome poem. A delightfully fresh and heartfelt read. it's a FAVE.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Line..
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