Simple Tones - Collaboration With Chris Green

My friend, 
    do you see
         every finger
        every key
         Can you hear
        words to sound
      float around
       Do you feel
          movement sing
              coloring

Will you take
  simple tones
    played alone
     Making music
    all your own
   Listen to
    melodies
    in the trees
  flowing softly
on the breeze

         Smell the air
      Hum your song
     to the birds
      that sing along
           Every giggle
         every sneeze
       resonates
   everywhere
  In your heart
    smiling there

Place your feet
  on the floor
    pirouette
      evermore
       In your soul
      take a chance
    come with me
  sing and dance

***

June 5, 2017
Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Duet Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:59 PM
Beautiful!! You know I love your "dancing" poems. :)
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 1:06 PM
And this one dances, doesn't it :D Thanks my friend!
Coreggia Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:03 AM
What a virtual whirlwind of music and colors your words generate . . . that is fabulous my friends. I love it when poetry leaps off the page and no only does it do so with the two of you but it is also an irresistible invitation to dance and sing along:) Amitiés
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Yes, don't you think so? I knew you'd like this one :D It's a happy happy poem.
Ricci Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Hiya Darren. I love this. Honestly. It is energizing uplifting and more. Be proud. Have a wonderful afternoon. I am leaving to go back home this morning. Boo Hoo (lol)
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Awwww, I hope you enjoyed yourself :) See you soon again my friend!
Ricci Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 5:50 AM
Good Afternoon Darren and Good Morning Chris. Allow me to say to you both "May all the senses be alive and well" Further, within your words and expression they are. Honestly. This is marvelous and you both make the reader feel energized. Well done in its entirety starting with a title of perfection. Have a wonderful day. You leave the readers on a grand note. Congratulations on the collaboration. To you both I say -- s m i l e --
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Hey there Lisa, so happy you enjoy this! It is fun, isn't it? A real poem - song to smile :) And you did! Have a great day, my friend.
Vaso Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 9:20 PM
I love Lindsey, I listen to her all the time! This is such a delightful poem, and a great collab!
White Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Yeah, I do too, it's so happy! And it was a fun collab indeed, enjoyed it.
Murray Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 5:41 PM
It's so obvious music flows in your blood Darren. Just like her.
White Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Thanks Jean :D
Downing  Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 4:43 PM
It's got rhythm, upbeat and I'm dancing along :) fabulous collab you two. I'm loving it :) :)
White Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 10:43 PM
Thanks, and yeah, it has that beat indeed, it's written like that.
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 3:26 AM
Beautifully done guys! Great collab!
White Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 4:00 AM
Thanks Budgie :) It's great, working with Chris!
Williams Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 3:18 AM
What a great collaboration Darren and Chris.The music really enhanced your lively words set to it. Who would not feel like dancing to this lively number? A great write..... Maria
White Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 3:58 AM
I fully agree, it's happy, fun, and invites to dance :)
Coreggia Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:22 PM
A fun write that prances over the page. Nicely done:) Amitiés
White Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:16 AM
It does, doesn't it? Thank you :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Sweet write you two! xomo :)
White Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 1:11 PM
Thank you, ma mo :)
Fields Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 9:17 AM
made me think of Hip-hop for kids - cute
White Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Fun isn't it? Just a happy poem :)
Smith Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Fabulous my friends.
White Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Thanks Tim :)
Stebbings Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Love everything about this, A brilliant collaboration !. Definitely a Fav. // Barry
White Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Thanks Barry \o/
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 5:59 AM
So beautiful in form and words! Lovely, Chris and Darren!
White Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 7:18 AM
Thanks Kim, it is playful, isn't it? And so is the video :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:00 AM
The video is fun and filled with much joy!
Ella Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 1:18 AM
A lovely collaboration with Chris of music and dance - the video is cool too! Have a wonderful day :)
White Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 1:32 AM
So happy you like it. It's a happy and fun poem, it has a very seductive rhythm to it, inviting to dance :)
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