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Simple Pleasures

In a busy world I don't take for granted simple pleasures like snuggling with a loved one on a chilly winter's night Saving keepsakes of the things I collect and call treasures. Finding myself in the dark until someone turns on a light. I'm pleased that my children still come to me for advice Happy with the blooms, from bulbs I planted last year. It's wonderful when a dear friend does something nice... like seeing me crying, then gently wipes away my tear. Sugary kisses from my grandchild placed on my cheek as sweet as the bite of a warm cinnamon bun with icing Soft rain like mist is a gift from Mother Nature that I seek and hoping to fall in love makes romance sound enticing. Before rising in the morning I enjoy a long languid stretch Being the giver instead of the one who takes in greed Liking the end results of charcoal portraits that I sketch Having a stranger return my smile is a pleasure, indeed. Being gifted with a bouquet of flowers for no reason at all Having a thirteenth doughnut thrown in for good measure Being able to stand and walk after taking an emotional fall Building faith in God overflows my heart with pure pleasure. * * * * January 20th, 2016
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Gulley Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Once again you have spun a lovely bouquet of colorful words, my pen friend. I so love the last stanza (Having faith in God fills my heart to overflowing with pleasure.) Awesome write, Lin. Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. God Bless.....Sharon : )
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:19 PM
I thank you for so many lovely comments, Sharon.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:06 AM
Yet another lovely win Lin.. big congrats!
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Thanks a lot, Upma. ;)
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:58 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Thank you, Susan. ;)
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Back to congratulate you on your nice win, Lin. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Thank you, Sandra..Hugs.
Canerdy Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:39 PM
What a beautiful poem. Congrats on your win! Janice
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:17 PM
ok...
Canerdy Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Lin, please ignore the repeated comment. P Soup kept telling me "wrong code"--so I kept sending. Janice
Canerdy Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:38 PM
What a beautiful poem. Congrats on your win! Janice
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Thank you so much, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:38 PM
What a beautiful poem. Congrats on your win! Janice
Lane Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Thanks very much, Janice.
Merryman Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:24 PM
A wonderful picture of what simple pleasures are to you! My favorite part was the first two lines of stanza 3. Nothing sweeter! Congrats on your placement in my contest, Lin, and thanks for participating! Love, Kim
Lane Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:27 PM
They were my favorite too, Kim. Thanks for a fun contest.
Sage Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 4:32 PM
beautiful write Lin, your simple pleasures are indeed lovely
Sage Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:56 PM
don't mind that Lin, it happens, i saw the comment trying to hide too but i couldn't push it to view lol....congratulations dear one, the poem was well written and lovely
Lane Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Thank you, Sage. I'm sorry I didn't see your comment before today. ;(
Haight Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Wonderful 'simple pleasures', Lin, and so wonderful how you present them in your lovely poem. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 9:01 AM
You're comments are always so very kind, Sandra. Thank you. hugs back to ya!
Anish Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:53 AM
When I find something I thought I lost I think "There is a God"! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Hi, Matthew. What a coincidence you should mention that one! It was on my list but my 5 verses were filled too quickly to include it. Thank you so very much.
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Lin, I enjoyed reading about your simple pleasures. This piece was flowing with positivity.Well done. Best of luck in the contest-Alexis
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, Alexis. I think we could all list so very many things that we consider simple pleasures.
La France Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Lin, oh how beautiful, your poem touched my heart and soul, so wonderfully penned, a true winning poem for me, I love this write so much, well done ~
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Many thanks for your lovely comments, Constance. You made me smile~another simple pleasure!
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