Simple Pleasure

I walk on tip-toes in the dark
To take another awe-struck peep
A perfect, tiny, masterpiece
In blue pajamas, wrapped in sleep.

My best creation, born of love
Whose life my soul perchance reflects
And every nuance of his face
My joyous heart again inspects.

An artist with her greatest art
Whose work has only just begun
Each day will add a color, stroke
To this, my canvas, called "My Son."

And nothing else this mother needs
Not food, not shelter, or even rest
But to gaze upon my greatest work
This simple pleasure is the best.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Canerdy Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Cindy! The "masterpiece" and "canvas" metaphors are especially appealing. Janice
Scars Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 6:11 AM
Cindi- nothing greater than being a mother :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
De Burca Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 6:37 PM
A beautiful poem, congrats on your win.
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:15 PM
I remember this jewel! Still a precious write! Congrats on your win, Cindi! Blessings!
Devnath  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Mother is always great. A nice 7.Congratulation on your win my lovely friend, bl
Rockwell Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Thank you!!
A  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:26 AM
Cindi, Lovely win. WUV **SKAT**
Rockwell Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Thank you, my friend!
A   Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Hi Cindi, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Rockwell Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Thanks! I will!
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:15 AM
Cindi, Congrats on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:49 AM
What a pleasure to read Cindi.. congrats on big win!
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:40 AM
Congratulations on your win!
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:56 PM
CINDI, Congrats on your Simple Pleasure win. Hugs ** SKAT
Gorelick Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:01 PM
I was wondering if anyone would chose this theme..you did and did it so well. Congrats..I was hooked at the first stanza. Barbara
Merryman Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 3:03 PM
As a mother, I can relate to your simple pleasure, Cindi! Creatively and beautifully written! Congrats on your 2nd place win and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim
Godwin Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Oh, Cindi - you got me, my only baby was a boy so you really got me. I know and lived this feeling when he was but a little sponge, absorbing everything and changing so fast. I would sit to just watch a moment before doing chores. Suddenly, I would notice the entire day was gone and I was oh so content. Love this. Good luck in the contest ... CayCay
Rockwell Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Thank you! I'm glad I touched you. I have daughters but the feelings are the same. When all is said and done, my real legacy will be my human art.
Gorelick Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Oh, I agree...nothing better. I love this and will save it to my favorites. BG
Rockwell Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Thank you so much!
Underwood Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Oh wow, such a wonderful masterpiece who will colour your life in so many ways.
Rockwell Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Thank you.
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