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Amidst the tempestuous waters and dreams Some argue we are all linked by similar streams Yet, I disagree, as countless distinct ships, Cross those raging waters, reaching for grips. Attestive people travel on ocean vessels In terms of style and ease, they settle Unwinding in their balcony rooms Relaxed, hands resting on glasses, and fumes. Others travel aboard power yachts As if all is fine in spikes and hot spots With little regard for smaller crafts That can hinder their gains and laughs. Several are battling on warships Nothing seems to be fitting their ships Consistently getting ready for anything For the close invincible battle, the bell rings. Others are huddling in their life jackets Pray for their rescue, ripped in dust packets Waiting for the waves to subside And dreading the incoming tide. Many people dream of their paddle They are clinging to life by a saddle They are asking for a begrime of luck And a chance to board a boat or a truck. Some still don't cognize how to swim And are scared by each wave and whim They're trying to retain their balance weighed out with nonchalance. So, while you are on this way, To a most secure and tranquil bay Retain an eye out for other shipmates. Who might look for some aid, or cates? Who would bestow them a life belt? Or perhaps an oar or paddle dwelt? Maybe they can profit from your advice Going around in loops and dreaming twice. My unmet dream is to value all that I hold All of the lovely people in my life are gold The awe I deserve and am receiving And the peace found with breathing.
3rd Place Contest Winner Written: May 28, 2023 Dreaming Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 6/22/2023 12:56:00 PM
Lasaad, your amazing ability to write images and look at all sides of a theme is just awesome! You carried your theme effortlessly from one stanza to the next - from one line to the next. This is hard to do and it just flows from your poetic heart. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you dear friend.!
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Date: 6/15/2023 8:27:00 PM
A lovely poem Sotto, congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle
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Date: 6/15/2023 2:28:00 AM
Amazing writing. Love it. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 6/15/2023 8:09:00 AM
I deeply appreciate your remarkable words, as they truly uplift and inspire me. I appreciate your reading placing and commenting on my poem.
Date: 5/29/2023 8:50:00 AM
Wonderful rhyming ! I envy your ability at minting poems of exceptional quality. Kudos dear friend !
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Date: 5/29/2023 7:04:00 AM
So, while you are on this way, To a most secure and tranquil bay-- Retain an eye out for other shipmates... I found the essence of your poem in these lines, my friend. Such endearing sentiments!
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Date: 5/29/2023 1:26:00 AM
Wonderful rhyme, Sotto. Great descriptions.
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Date: 5/28/2023 10:04:00 PM
Nicely done, I love your closing line especially, sail on sir :)
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