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Silverwing

If I achieve nothing else, if all that I have worked for is for naught, I can die happy knowing that I have lived through my soul instead of forcing my soul to live through me. The roots of this tree are tied to clouds No earth and no stone can hold on in their simplicity To the amber leaves and glittering branches That shelter the silverwing faeries of my mind In the distance, there is the sparkle of amber Count the clouds, slowly rolling Dropping tears from the crescents in your eyes Slowly drowning the ignorance Let the rivers flood Tear down the concrete walls Sealing innocence and blocking its light Let the clouds collide Bathing us in their flashes of truth Drowning out the sounds of hate with their beautiful confusion And let the mountains bow To the silverwing faeries of the mind Below, the ants swarm Marching to the rhythm of the ticking timepiece Melting in the August sun Pile the rubble Up the hill Down the hill The rhythmic footfall carves a trench Deeper into the earth Till the softness eclipses the sun Above, there is only sky No dawn to the East No dusk to the West But in the distance, there is the sparkle of Amber A golden twinkle against the pale blue A humble light that can shatter mountains Dancing on an eternal horizon, growing and fading Its touch as gentle as a ripple Caressing the shores of my soul In the palm of my hand, there is my sparkle of amber

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/3/2010 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Mahmood. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/28/2010 7:29:00 PM
Mahmood -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mahmood. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:55:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in a well written piece - many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/23/2010 4:47:00 PM
Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep that pen flowing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:15:00 PM
Interesting write, original, imaginative and filled with great imagery. Congrats on yur poem being featured this week. Caroline.
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Date: 9/29/2009 9:20:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us Mahmood. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2009 3:16:00 PM
You had me in the palm of your hand during this read...I love it. BG
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Date: 9/28/2009 1:56:00 PM
Just marvelous picture story I would make an excellent "guided meditation!" Light & Love poet
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