SILVERED PRACTICE of DON JUAN

When first we met, in sailor town, the slim jim chased, and I was found. His greedy lips did hold me down. With me, he wed, and we were bound. But leaves did crisp and we did fall into set ways beneath old oak. The charm and grace did hit a wall, so I did wink and he awoke. He turned, placed kiss upon my lips, with silvered practice of Don Juan. The shadowed moon - a great eclipse. He’s my bright sun - curtains are drawn. Find your Don Juan in places, close. A smile in bed - a sizzling rose.
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Zimmerman Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Very nicely written, Kim. In both style and content. Robert
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Hind Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 6:38 PM
This was cute! Congrats on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 5:32 AM
I appreciate you, Paige!
Johnson Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 9:30 PM
Thanks, Kim, for sharing this. It engendered a warm touch in my heart.
George Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 8:56 PM
Living romance of a life time. Much enjoyed your well constructed sonnet and the comparison to Don Juan. Congratulations dear Kim on your well deserved top win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
May Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 2:52 PM
Thank you, Joe! I appreciate you! :) Happy Thanksgiving!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 12:01 PM
I enjoyed your creative/fun write. "Happy Thanksgiving" Have a great/fun day............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Paula! Happy Thanksgiving!
Ball Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Even the Bible speaks of the best love being the old love you have stayed with through the years. Nicely done Kim. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Yes it does! Thank you, Judy!
Kauffman Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 10:17 AM
So playful and sensual, Kim! Especially love your "sizzling rose!" Blessings! Happy Thanksgiving.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Thank you, Sam! Happy Thanksgiving!
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