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SILVERED PRACTICE of DON JUAN

When first we met, in sailor town, the slim jim chased, and I was found. His greedy lips did hold me down. With me, he wed, and we were bound. But leaves did crisp and we did fall into set ways beneath old oak. The charm and grace did hit a wall, so I did wink and he awoke. He turned, placed kiss upon my lips, with silvered practice of Don Juan. The shadowed moon - a great eclipse. He’s my bright sun - curtains are drawn. Find your Don Juan in places, close. A smile in bed - a sizzling rose.

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Date: 11/29/2023 1:05:00 PM
Very nicely written, Kim. In both style and content. Robert
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 11/24/2023 6:38:00 PM
This was cute! Congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2023 5:32:00 AM
I appreciate you, Paige!
Date: 11/22/2023 9:30:00 PM
Thanks, Kim, for sharing this. It engendered a warm touch in my heart.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2023 6:18:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Curtis! :)
Date: 11/21/2023 8:56:00 PM
Living romance of a life time. Much enjoyed your well constructed sonnet and the comparison to Don Juan. Congratulations dear Kim on your well deserved top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2023 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
Date: 11/21/2023 1:02:00 PM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2023 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, Joe! I appreciate you! :) Happy Thanksgiving!
Date: 11/20/2023 4:18:00 PM
a beautifully constructed Sonnet, Kim. The images you created of Don Juan were perfect..I also appreciated the romance in this poem, the romance of a lifetime. Have to fave this one. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2023 6:25:00 PM
Thank you! So appreciate, Sara!
Date: 11/20/2023 12:01:00 PM
I enjoyed your creative/fun write. "Happy Thanksgiving" Have a great/fun day............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2023 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Happy Thanksgiving!
Date: 11/20/2023 10:27:00 AM
Even the Bible speaks of the best love being the old love you have stayed with through the years. Nicely done Kim. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2023 11:45:00 AM
Yes it does! Thank you, Judy!
Date: 11/20/2023 10:17:00 AM
So playful and sensual, Kim! Especially love your "sizzling rose!" Blessings! Happy Thanksgiving.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2023 10:24:00 AM
Thank you, Sam! Happy Thanksgiving!

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