Silver Strands

Her dark hair, laced with silver strands,
cascaded once with sable glint,
then lost (with drifting of the sands
of time) the chasteness of its tint.

It still grows long, but she has kept
her dark hair laced with silver strands
pulled back, attractively upswept,
at times enwrapped in stylish bands.

She misses days of few demands,
the ragtop down, her locks wind-tossed.
Her dark hair laced with silver strands
reminds her now of all she's lost. . .

She combs it out in dying light
of dusk and dreams a lover's hands
were touching it this moon-streaked night -
her dark hair, laced with silver strands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/7/2014 7:23:00 AM
Stunning definetly one of my favorites.
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Date: 3/4/2012 9:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea! I don't know how I missed this one before, but I love it. I have spent much of my life working with the elderly and have a great respect for their wisdom and life experience. This one goes to my faves! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:41:00 PM
I see there was a win with this; tied within those silver strands,, well done Andrea..)
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:13:00 PM
ANDREA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/2/2012 7:34:00 AM
enjoyed this one very much......congrats on the win................sashi
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "UPTO SIXTEEN" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 8:26:00 PM
congrats Andrea on this lovely win ..I remember reading this piece and it touched me then as well as now luv..
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:20:00 PM
Andrea, I love this kind of poetry. Sad, introspective. Beautifully written. Congrats on making Brian's winners' list..................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/1/2012 4:38:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Sad but beautifully written, well deserved win. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/10/2011 6:28:00 AM
Here you penned a very touching poem Andrea!Whose story you have written here?--kashinath
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:30:00 AM
I love this poem and I can certainly relate...I'm 45 yrs. old and I'm getting some silver strands myself. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite poets! --Susan (P.S. Thanks for commenting on my "Begging Change from Society" poem too.)
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:43:00 PM
Beautiful as always.
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Date: 7/6/2010 2:23:00 AM
yes!! Your winning streaks continue to sparkle like this silver strands of yours! ;) super congrats yet again! whew--trying to catch up with my comments-- it seems like I've been on the Soup forever--nikko :)
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your poem being in the spotlight in Joe Flach's contest "One Good Quatern Deserves Another". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2010 9:57:00 AM
Congrats Andrea! This is a lovely piece. Take care, -Mike
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Date: 7/2/2010 9:18:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Andrea! Congrat's on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:17:00 AM
This is a beauty, Andrea!! You are on a roll!!! Well done, and my congratulations for another winning poem!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/1/2010 9:43:00 PM
Congrats Andrea.. knew this one was a sure winner when first read.. enjoy my friend.. u are on a poetic roll ..enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:29:00 PM
lThis is beautiful and well deserved of highest honors. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:51:00 PM
Andrea, a terrific poem indeed. Very creative. Somewhat nostalgic, somewhat mellow, somewhat sad, yet with a touch of grace and maturity. Beautifully written. Thank you for entering this in my contest.
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Date: 6/25/2010 3:24:00 PM
This makes my 80 year old self kinda glad. Just knowing that someone notices the beauty of old age is nice. "Oh, mirror, mirror, on the wall, who be da fairest one of all?" Well it aint you suckah! Damn mirrors! Love, Dave
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:35:00 PM
such a good write. And you wove the refrain in their beautifully. Good luck in the contest. Charles
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:37:00 PM
Very memorable wistful words in the closing line Andrea.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:16:00 PM
soup Mail
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:29:00 PM
reminds me of Degas for some reason!
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