Silver Slippers

Silver slippers sliding off her feet, sparkling heels, Suspended beat of the air, the feel of surrender to the pumpkin skies, the rise of parting souls. Bare feet, barely touching the stairs; the tip toes of spiraling rails. Her midnight blue gown swooshing, swaying, twirling. The moon glittering like her tiara. Poof, like magic, she’s disappeared, as his hands fondle one of the shapely shoes; perfect though they’d been used in romantic tango half the night. The cool night air still holds her lips, her breath, the essence of her charm, her slippers. He dare not turn back the clock - hears its melody chiming. Her timing was impeccable, almost laughable, as the princess-dolts had already stepped on his toes, their knees creaked, and all were wildly anxious. But she showed up at the top of the stairs, suspended time, then descended the winding way, all along lifting his eyes, biding her time. The only son, ready to take the throne - his palms were wet, his knees trembled, love at first sight, before she even spoke. She didn’t disappoint. She could sing and dance. Where did she come from? He’s too entranced to ask, but as courage comes the clock strikes. and she runs away like a ghost…
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George Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 8:43 PM
This twist to the Cinderella story is very captivating. Great imagination and beautiful rendering. All the best, dear Kim.
Hind Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 6:48 PM
Amazing. I like your version of Cinderella much better, if I may say so!!! Your gift never disappoints dear friend. <3
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Whoa!! Cinderella like, but so different. If for a contest, it reads like a great contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 5:52 AM
Thank you, Sara! Hugs ~ Kim
Buhagiar Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 1:34 AM
You concocted a different story on Cinderella. So well done. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 5:53 AM
Thank you kindly, dear one!
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 7:39 PM
Love this revision of the classic tale, Kim. Sparklingly written. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 5:53 AM
So glad you liked it!
Rolland Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 6:30 PM
made me think to Cinderella, this is subtle and brilliant, loved the music and alliterations too, a favorite, merci poet
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 5:58 AM
A blushing poet! Thank you, Yann! “La gentillesse sera récompensée” ~ Cendrillon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 5:35 PM
love this retelling--beautiful and engaging imagery and lines. Well done, Kim, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 6:00 AM
Thank you for your nice comment, sweet friend!
DiMino Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 12:17 PM
Delightful Classic, brilliantly, poetically retold, but with a charming, newly created royal flare. It will take me all afternoon at the least, I am certain, to stop reeling and dancing. Wonderful write!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 1:29 PM
LOL! Yay! I am smiling!
Greenhough Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 7:40 AM
Absolutely charming and endearing. I love how you transformed this fairytale into an introspection on the deep emotions of the characters. I have to fave.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 11:31 AM
So glad you liked this, Hilda! Thank you!
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