Barbara Gorelick Poet Choka

Silver Dollar Moon

silver dollar moon
suspended in a dark sky
wind rustles the autumn leaves
secrets in the night
moonbeams on the forest floor
wolves pay homage at midnight



Barbara Gorelick 10/14/11
For Russel's Full Moon contest

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Olusegun Arowolo November 3, 2011 at 7:13 AM Wonderful write,Barbara.Congratulations on your win..

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2011 at 12:16 PM Wow, what a great way to describe the moon -- a shining silver dollar in the autumn sky. Congratulations on a well-deserved first-place win, dear LNC. Love you, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2011 at 9:46 AM Congrats BG on your first place win with this visual delight luv..

James Marshall Goff November 2, 2011 at 8:16 AM beautiful poem for winner's circle! Barbara, your last line brings your poem to mystical conclusion, jimbo

Valerie Sherman November 2, 2011 at 8:14 AM Congrats on an awesome win Barbara...well deserved!...Valerie

Carol Sunshine Brown November 2, 2011 at 5:41 AM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "What Happens During A Full Moon" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta November 2, 2011 at 1:01 AM Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Barbara

Margaret Foster November 1, 2011 at 11:58 PM Congratulations on your success with this delightful choka Barbara. It paints a lovely picture... Margaret

Russell Sivey November 1, 2011 at 10:12 PM Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest, "what happens under a full moon."

Charles Henderson October 27, 2011 at 4:58 PM Very nice Barbara, I have been meaning to look more into the choka.

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2011 at 3:09 AM LOVE IT, Barbara.Thanks for inspiring me. NOwI want to write for this contest too.