Silver Clouded Skies

Dawn's light shimmers through silver clouded skies as the flow of morning's tide starts to rise In a dinghy, he prays for just one wish "Please, God, let me catch a lot of big fish." Patiently, he sits waiting for the tug on line baited with a grubworm or bug. Fishing twine, his small fingers, lightly grips Not a sigh or complaint comes from his lips. His father, lost at sea, fighting a war when he was but a little lad of four. His mornings now spent on the rippling sea to feed his younger siblings, there were three. "I can take care of us," he said out loud. His Mom's loving smile made him very proud She cried while sewing him a winter coat so he would stay warm as he sat afloat. He rises before the first glint of sun Doing a man's work before day is done providing his family food to sup A child, too quickly compelled to grow up. November 9, 2021 Photo #2 Rhyming Me A Poem 2 Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper
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Kauffman Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 10:00 AM
A very compelling and heart wrenching story of love and devotion, Jenna. You are right, this child did have to grow up too quickly! Well done. Congratulations and high fives. Blessings. Happy Thanksgiving.
Logan Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thanks so very much, Sam. I appreciate your comments.
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:37 PM
dropping back with many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:54 PM
okie dokie...thank you.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Jenna, a tale that moves the heart, so beautifully crafted....Congratulations on your win! Blessings, Paulette
Logan Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 4:31 PM
Thank you so very much, Paulette.
Hutchings Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 6:10 PM
Congratulations!! What a beautiful poem!! You and I wrote about the same illustration, but I am humbled by your poem, as we both told a similar story. You are very talented! Great job! -Meghan
Logan Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 12:15 AM
What nice comments you’ve written for me, Meghan. You’re a very gracious poet. Thanks ever so much.
Roper Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jenna. Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 4:30 PM
You may use it if you wish.
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 10:28 AM
yes it did, when I think of a gallery I think of art, and poetry is the same... when one is good, all are good. Everyone has a different style and you cannot be negative because they paint different they just see things different. This is the second contest that I am using the poems for the next book... and if you don't want it in the book let me know...
Logan Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 12:12 AM
I never get disappointed over trivial things. I see you used my words to write a poem, so my comment served to inspire you.
Roper Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 1:58 PM
Sorry you were disappointed
Logan Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 12:07 PM
I’ll say thank you, but it was not really a contest…more of a gallery showing.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Hello Jenna, He really grew up quickly. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:00 AM
Hello Jenna, yes he had no choice. Hugs.
Logan Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 2:35 AM
He had little choice. Thank you, Darlene. Hugging you back.
Mcconnell Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Lovely penning Jenna with nice rhyme and flow with good wording too. Take care, Gordon
Logan Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 2:35 AM
I'm grateful for your time of reading and commenting. Thanks, Gordon.
Cunningham Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Great interpretation of the picture Jenna, it happened to many young men after the war when they had to become the breadwinner when their fathers never came back. Tom
Logan Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Kinda robbed them of their childhood, but when necessity calls, we must answer. Thanks for your input, Tom.
Baker Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Matching image for a beautiful poem. Very thorough desciption of the life of a boy that had to be a man. I really enjoyed reading this one and reflecting back to fishing as a boy. Bill
Logan Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Hi, Bill. I appreciate your thoughts. Thanks. I haven't been fishing in years, but always enjoyed it.
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