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The wind has set dandelion tufts free to ride summer breezes and spread their seed. And she whispers, "If only that were me," her jittery heart longing to be freed. She oft dreams of floating high in the sky untethered from earthly reality. She is to be married in late July, and she is not so sure; she wants to be. She watched yellow dandelions turn white as time drained their vivid color away. And it appeared to happen overnight, making her reflect on her wedding day. But she soon dismisses such silly thoughts, for they tend to tie her stomach in knots.

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Date: 8/22/2023 3:43:00 PM
Hello Emile, she is nervos for her wedding day. She will feel better after she is married. My friend. enjoy your evening . /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/23/2023 3:47:00 PM
Hello Emile, You are welcome my friend. My friend, enjoy your evening. /Darlene\
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/23/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene, I appreciate your thoughts, my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/21/2023 4:14:00 AM
Ah the process of consciousness that percolates to the surface in riddles and metaphorical drawings .Enjoyed your thoughtful write.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2023 8:04:00 AM
Thanks, Vickey; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs