Silly Thoughts

She spies dandelion tufts floating free atop a summer breeze, spreading their seed. And she whispers, "If only that were me," jittery feelings, longing to be freed. She's supposed to be married in July, and yet, she's not so sure she wants to be. And dreams she's a cloud, drifting in the sky, untethered from earthly reality. She's seen dandelions age and turn white, as time drains their yellow color away. And it appears to happen overnight, making her reflect on her wedding day. But she soon puts aside such silly thoughts, which tend to tie her stomach into knots.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Hello Emile, she is nervos for her wedding day. She will feel better after she is married. My friend. enjoy your evening . /Darlene\
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August 23, 2023 at 3:47 PM
Hello Emile, You are welcome my friend. My friend, enjoy your evening. /Darlene\
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thanks, Darlene, I appreciate your thoughts, my friend, Emile.
Rhymer Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:14 AM
Ah the process of consciousness that percolates to the surface in riddles and metaphorical drawings .Enjoyed your thoughtful write.
Pinet Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Thanks, Vickey; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
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