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Silly Sally

Silly Sally Silly Sally sat silently sifting sugar For Billy the baker to bake better buttered buns. But silly Sally smiled so seductively, Billy burnt the better butter buns he'd baked. Barry Stebbings 13/09/16

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John Michaels

Date: 12/2/2017 6:46:00 AM

Nicely done, Barry - made me chuckle!! Regards, John.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/2/2017 1:14:00 PM

Thank you very much, John. // Barry

Afzal Nusker

Date: 11/27/2017 12:17:00 AM

This is such a fun poem. Great example, Barry.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/1/2017 1:15:00 PM

Thank you very much, Afzal. // Barry

Beverly Read

Date: 9/17/2016 2:23:00 PM

How cute, brought a smile to my face. I can see the whole scene. Kudos for the construction.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/18/2016 12:18:00 PM

Thank you very much, Beverly. Barry.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2016 11:17:00 AM

great alliteration Barry I love using this in my poetry too:-):-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/14/2016 3:49:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jan. Barry.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/13/2016 9:31:00 AM

Enjoyed! Made me smile, Barry!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/14/2016 3:48:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim. Barry.