Barry Stebbings Poet Alliteration

Silly Sally

Silly Sally

     Silly Sally sat silently sifting sugar

     For Billy the baker to bake better buttered buns.

     But silly Sally smiled so seductively,

     Billy burnt the better butter buns he'd baked.

       Barry Stebbings
         13/09/16

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John Michaels December 2, 2017 at 6:46 AM Nicely done, Barry - made me chuckle!! Regards, John. Barry Stebbings December 2, 2017 at 1:14 PM Thank you very much, John. // Barry

Afzal Nusker November 27, 2017 at 12:17 AM This is such a fun poem. Great example, Barry. Barry Stebbings December 1, 2017 at 1:15 PM Thank you very much, Afzal. // Barry

Beverly Read September 17, 2016 at 2:23 PM How cute, brought a smile to my face. I can see the whole scene. Kudos for the construction. Barry Stebbings September 18, 2016 at 12:18 PM Thank you very much, Beverly. Barry.

Jan Allison September 13, 2016 at 11:17 AM great alliteration Barry I love using this in my poetry too:-):-) hugs jan xx Barry Stebbings September 14, 2016 at 3:49 AM Thank you very much, Jan. Barry.

Kim Rodrigues September 13, 2016 at 9:31 AM Enjoyed! Made me smile, Barry! Barry Stebbings September 14, 2016 at 3:48 AM Thank you very much, Kim. Barry.