Silk

The rustle of silk As it falls from my body To lay at our feet.

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Don Johnson

Date: 10/28/2010 2:16:00 PM

Thank you for your comments babe... i remain your reticent slave... Which country are you hanging your hat in :) Don

Tara Jennings

Date: 10/26/2010 11:13:00 PM

sensual indeed, the fall and sound of the words brings forth the image and feel of the silk and mood. I like it.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 10/21/2010 6:44:00 PM

There are any number of men who would love to be in that room. Sensual, yet with a sense of dignity. I like this. Regards and thank you from Grard.

James Fraser

Date: 10/20/2010 7:49:00 AM

Teasing, tempting Senyru Francine. I love it >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/20/2010 5:27:00 AM

sounds nice...fine senryu!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/19/2010 6:22:00 PM

You are thinking in very sensual terms today, Francine. Do you have a love potion to share with us? This is a great image. Silk (or satin) falling to a lady's feet surely sets the mood for a romantic evening. Love, Carolyn