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I saw you face your lover; you both made a pattern quite distinctive in the dark. Silhouettes on the window shade displayed two hands that met two others; formed an arc. The hands, from arms outreached, delivering their upturned palms that now together pressed, could not release nor stop their quivering, anticipation physically expressed. Then two who stood behind a window posed, at last fell trembling into love’s abyss. Love’s essence on the shade was then transposed as bodies touched and mouths met in a kiss. Your shadow with your lover's intertwined. A valentine pulsed on the window’s blind. Sept. 11, 2017 for the Silhouette Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/28/2019 11:21:00 AM
Sensual.
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Date: 12/11/2017 9:55:00 PM
Wow, Andrea, such I beautiful, romantic sonnet. You write them so well. John
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Date: 11/4/2017 8:57:00 PM
Oh such romantic rhythm pulses thru your sonnet Andrea. A wondrous write with great poetic expression. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 9/24/2017 12:16:00 AM
Oh my, now this was really creative, loved it!
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Date: 9/19/2017 2:25:00 PM
a lovely sonnet Andrea..
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Date: 9/17/2017 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your placement with a nice vibrant poem.
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:18:00 PM
The poem is fabulous, congratulations on your awesome win,Andrea ... Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/16/2017 5:17:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest with this amazing write
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Date: 9/16/2017 4:37:00 PM
a beautiful love sonnet Andrea congrats on your win:-) i still have a block when it comes to writing this form:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:55:00 PM
Glad to see you here AD with a form you do so well and a subject you do so well (romance). There were so many quality writes in this contest and you deserved to be among the best.
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:38:00 PM
A beautiful love! sonnet , Andrea: Congratulations
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Date: 9/13/2017 8:54:00 PM
A superb sonnet, Andrea! Best of luck to you in the contest
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Date: 9/12/2017 1:32:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet, Andrea!
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Date: 9/12/2017 11:55:00 AM
Reminds me of the song silhouettes on the shade, this is really well done Andrea, Craig should like this one!
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Date: 9/12/2017 10:18:00 AM
yum ... that felt it's way to a motion picture ... oh my heart ...
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Date: 9/12/2017 2:33:00 AM
Awesome write, Andrea. Well done!
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Date: 9/11/2017 11:36:00 PM
This is really a wonderful poem Andrea! I loved the song Sihouettes "Two silhouettes on the shade"... the ending line. You must remember that song? I have to fave this one! : )
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:58:00 PM
This is great Andrea. Looks like a real winner. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:13:00 PM
What a brilliant and exquisite write my friend! I truly loved each and every line of the astounding poem this evening! What a way to have a romantic Silhouette, on a window's blind! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/11/2017 6:25:00 PM
Reminds me of a song - I believe it was from the early 60's about silhouettes. Do you remember it? The last two lines"thrust the fingernail into the heart Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/11/2017 4:55:00 PM
Sultry Andrea...you painted a perfect silhouette.
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Date: 9/11/2017 3:28:00 PM
WOW-lovely Sonnet--Impressed by how well the lines wrap around in a continuous theme. Well executed--good luck for a win, Andrea!
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