Silhouettes

I saw you face your lover; you both made
a pattern quite distinctive in the dark.
Silhouettes on the window shade displayed
two hands that met two others; formed an arc.

The hands, from arms outreached, delivering
their upturned palms that now together pressed,
could not release nor stop their quivering,
anticipation physically expressed.

Then two who stood behind a window posed,
at last fell trembling into love’s abyss.
Love’s essence on the shade was then transposed
as bodies touched and mouths met in a kiss.

Your shadow with your lover's intertwined.
A valentine pulsed on the window’s blind.


Sept. 11, 2017 for the Silhouette Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish
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Inman Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 11:21 AM
Sensual.
Gondolf Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Wow, Andrea, such I beautiful, romantic sonnet. You write them so well. John
Ashley Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:57 PM
Oh such romantic rhythm pulses thru your sonnet Andrea. A wondrous write with great poetic expression. Excellent and enjoyed!
Vaso Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 12:16 AM
Oh my, now this was really creative, loved it!
May Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 2:25 PM
a lovely sonnet Andrea..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:37 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your placement with a nice vibrant poem.
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:18 PM
The poem is fabulous, congratulations on your awesome win,Andrea ... Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest with this amazing write
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:37 PM
a beautiful love sonnet Andrea congrats on your win:-) i still have a block when it comes to writing this form:-( hugs jan xx
Cornish Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:55 PM
Glad to see you here AD with a form you do so well and a subject you do so well (romance). There were so many quality writes in this contest and you deserved to be among the best.
Sergi Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:38 PM
A beautiful love! sonnet , Andrea: Congratulations
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:54 PM
A superb sonnet, Andrea! Best of luck to you in the contest
Krampe Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 1:32 PM
Wonderful sonnet, Andrea!
Hamilton Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Reminds me of the song silhouettes on the shade, this is really well done Andrea, Craig should like this one!
Stars Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 10:18 AM
yum ... that felt it's way to a motion picture ... oh my heart ...
Tsitsikroni Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 2:33 AM
Awesome write, Andrea. Well done!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 11:36 PM
This is really a wonderful poem Andrea! I loved the song Sihouettes "Two silhouettes on the shade"... the ending line. You must remember that song? I have to fave this one! : )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 7:58 PM
This is great Andrea. Looks like a real winner. Best wishes for the contest.
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 7:13 PM
What a brilliant and exquisite write my friend! I truly loved each and every line of the astounding poem this evening! What a way to have a romantic Silhouette, on a window's blind! Great Work!!
Anish Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:25 PM
Reminds me of a song - I believe it was from the early 60's about silhouettes. Do you remember it? The last two lines"thrust the fingernail into the heart Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 4:55 PM
Sultry Andrea...you painted a perfect silhouette.
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 3:28 PM
WOW-lovely Sonnet--Impressed by how well the lines wrap around in a continuous theme. Well executed--good luck for a win, Andrea!
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