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Silent the Castle Walls

Stillness held love's flowers, in distant gazes spilling from their palms.. A cats meow, resounding atop timeless rafters; peering at her stage About a sixteenth century romance; dramatica, close the castle doors Hush the crowd betwixt breath they keep; frozen, amid that their heart ? As Juliet lifts her tearful blade and Romeo's love, now fast asleep; dreams... Not weep as time does part to gather once more aneath, these faraway stars.

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Date: 8/18/2013 1:01:00 AM
very nice ,,,, thank you for come by my page to read Floodgates ;}
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Date: 8/15/2013 9:04:00 PM
Such a romantic... The flow in this is particularly nice and suiting. Your word usage is great. Your title is excellent. What more is there to say? except " I needed this after I got slammed at work and fried many of burgers tonight. hehehe. I smell like grease. Not too romantic, so I won't write about it" :) take good care, btw, I left you a mail the other day. Lucinda
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