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Silent Stones, Eternal Echoes

In the hush of a May morning, I wander through the murmurs of a forgotten meadow, where time weaves through the tall grass, and the stones speak softly of the past. Old, weathered headstones, stoic and silent, etched with names that once danced upon the lips of loved ones, now cradled in the earth's enfold, their stories carried on the wings of the wind. The sun, a gentle brush upon the horizon, paints shadows long and memories vivid, as I trace the lines of history with my fingertips, each mark a testament to sacrifice and valor. Here lies a soldier of the Civil War, his name a faint echo, his deeds etched deep, the moss clings to his epitaph, a guardian of his tale, a silent testament to his courage. Nearby, a marker from the Great War, its marble face kissed by countless seasons, the letters worn, yet proud, each one a pulse of the past, a beat of bravery. And there, a soldier from the Second World War, his headstone stark and simple, standing in quiet dignity, a sentinel of remembrance amidst the rustling leaves. I pause at a grave adorned with a verse, a fragment of Walt Whitman’s soul, etched into the stone, a bridge to the eternal, “O Captain! my Captain!” murmurs through the air, each word a thread, binding the present to the past. The breeze carries the scent of wildflowers, a delicate bouquet of memory and mourning, as I stand in reverent silence, the weight of history pressing gently upon my heart. In this sacred space, where the past breathes still, I find a connection to those who came before, a shared humanity, a collective memory, etched in stone, held in the quiet enfold of the countryside. On this Memorial Day, in this ancient, rural resting place, I honor their lives, their sacrifices, and in the echo of Whitman’s words, I feel the pulse of time, a reminder that their legacy endures, woven into the very fabric of this land, forever remembered, forever revered.

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Date: 5/26/2024 3:59:00 PM
What a moving poem, Don! I was so touched that I began crying 3/4 of the way through it. Your title was a perfect one given your words and message. I enjoyed the reverence and respect entwined in your words and the introspection in your verses. I especially liked the 9th verse. WEll, actually, I liked them all. Each one was smooth and flowed smoothly to the next. What a magnificent poetic voice you have. Brilliantly done! have a pleasant weekend, Sara
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Date: 5/26/2024 8:33:00 AM
Don, epically brilliant!! As a veteran I salute you and this magnificent poem! I stand in reverence to them all!
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Date: 5/26/2024 7:56:00 AM
Dear Don, the voice of this mesmerizing piece is sensitive, reverent and introspective. Lovely sprinklings of alliteration and assonance upon the imagery add richness and depth to the intimate feel of your narration. I adore your reference to Whitman (one of my fav poets) and his magnificent poem O Captain! My Captain! as it suits the elegant, graceful tone of your poem so well. Indeed, through your poem I feel "the weight of history pressing gently upon my heart", too. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/26/2024 7:26:00 AM
I thank you for this Don, as it seems "forever" is fading into this generations "whatever"....beautifully written.
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