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Silent Lightning

Glimmers of silent lightning; silvery stillness mirage of thunder 09/08/23

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/21/2023 4:48:00 PM

You painted a good picture in just 3 lines with your fine imagery, Michelle. I want to congratulate you on your three poems being published in Poetry Soup's latest edition of their Anthologies! YEAH !!! I also want to wish you and yours, a Happy Thanksgiving! Hugs, Bill

James Horn

Date: 9/30/2023 3:45:00 PM

I call mine Horn Haiku. Is really descriptive.

Deb M

Date: 9/27/2023 9:01:00 AM

Great imagery Michelle…. much said in so few words! Debx

Pivotal Poetry

Date: 9/22/2023 8:41:00 PM

A Haunting thought and wonderful Haiku.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/13/2023 12:09:00 PM

Hello :) Enjoyed read! Have a nice day, best wishes, AA

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/13/2023 1:17:00 AM

Beautiful!

The Situation

Date: 9/9/2023 9:07:00 PM

Rainless here in Phoenix.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/9/2023 7:41:00 PM

As George Carlin once recorded: But there's a squadron of Russian IBMs headed straight for us, so 'I wouldn't sweat the thundershowers!' lol... Impactful, impressive imagery, Michelle. ~ Gershon

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2023 7:36:00 AM

Worth silently pondering. :0)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/9/2023 6:54:00 AM

Brilliant haiku. Will the storm occur?

Gary Radice

Date: 9/9/2023 3:12:00 AM

For me, it's the ominous stillness in wait for the thunder that adds added depth to your wonderful haiku. Cheers - Gary

Ink Empress

Date: 9/9/2023 2:46:00 AM

Lightning and thunder, i always get scared when they play their games .. what a deep and powerful write with such moving imagery. I love “ ominous stillness” “ mirage of thunder! Love this haiku! So well crafted descriptions in sheer eloquence.

Curie Stark

Date: 9/9/2023 1:08:00 AM

What a sight

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/8/2023 7:21:00 PM

This is beautiful, powerful, Michelle. A very well written Haiku. Wonderful carefully crafted choice of words that convey so much. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend. :)

Paige Hind

Date: 9/8/2023 3:26:00 PM

Very deep and beautiful....