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''silence Sweet Solitude''

 
the solitude the silence silence of a bee in the forest silence of the leaves leaves on majestic trees leaves my soul quivering quivering treasures quivering happiness and joy joy of freedom and journeying on joy in my soul beyond time time entangled in vines time to pause in the emerald emerald windswept meadows trembling emerald velvet foliage creeping creeping and creeping the embroidery of green creeping sunlight fills the shadows shadows are where the violets sleep shadows hide a hundred chirping wings wings of the poets dreamy muse wings of a little butterfly kissing the decay decay in the tangled branches decay beautiful and divine divine tufts of yellow divine bliss in silence silence in the garlands of green silence in hushed echoes echoes of unseen songsters echoes of wild streams bubbling and flowing flowing pen flowing words and verses verse amongst the scattered dandelions verses in the whispering calm calm the clusters of vines twining calm the bliss bliss in a deep canopy of towering giants bliss under an azure above above the cowslip and foxglove above blue birds fly fly downy wings fly with the sweet wind wind that whispers in my ears wind that lifts the tufts of pretty flowers flowers wilted and dying flowers with petals forlorn forlorn my poetic words forlorn and weeping weeping on tattered paper in solitude weeping poems and rhymes and verses created in the silence solitude . . . _______________________ May 23, 2015 Poetry/Blitz/''silence sweet solitude'' Copyright Protected, ID 05-676-485-23 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, shhhhh sponsor, Silent One, Judged 2015 8th Place

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Date: 11/17/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thank you to all who have commented and left congratulations on my poem, appreciate so much ~
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Date: 11/17/2018 8:34:00 AM
"...fly downy wings fly with the sweet wind wind that whispers in my ears wind that lifts the tufts of pretty flowers flowers wilted and dying flowers with petals forlorn forlorn my poetic words forlorn and weeping..." I am so impressed with your talent, and your spirit...
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Date: 8/11/2015 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome poetry n win broken!
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Date: 8/11/2015 5:18:00 PM
BW, this is amazing. Congrats on your win. :-)Alexis
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Date: 8/11/2015 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win hugs eve
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Date: 8/11/2015 10:40:00 AM
WOW, this is poetry at its best. Broken, WOW, I love what solitude does to your pen. SKAT
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Date: 8/11/2015 8:54:00 AM
Difficult and beautiful. "leaves on majestic trees leaves my soul quivering" clever phrase.
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:13:00 AM
- A wonderful poem B.W. (one of the best I've read in a long time .... T. R. of course) - Enjoy the rest of the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2015 2:52:00 AM
Wonderful pen Broken wings! A perfect 7 my friend!
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Date: 5/24/2015 1:05:00 AM
Stunning!!!!...amazing how your pen flows...7..A favorite.
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:48:00 PM
Oh how you put me at peace with this one, love it from start to finish. Great poem! Stay strong always Ken
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:06:00 PM
You've sent me to my zeneth dear poet with this write ! Intrinsic value of solitude, without doubt Constance ! I so enjoyed lifting up like that ! Have a wonderfully beautiful weekend.........much love, james
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Date: 5/23/2015 6:25:00 PM
No words I will add..Won't spoil this beautym I just favour it !
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Date: 5/23/2015 2:27:00 PM
WoW! What a fantastic piece, I like this form so much.......7!,,,and a fav, your poem has made me want to try this form...excellent write friend.........Afolabi.
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