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Silence in you

Is there a way you can show me your silence? This world is deafening to me Can I find the words that I'm seeking.. Dream of a quiet place with only you speaking Teach me to hear with my other senses draw down all these distorted fences Want to listen through the day with you the whole day in a quiet song of you just of you learn from your solitude I want to., now and forever know what it is to feel through only those few the touch of your hand replace the fragments of a symphonic band Invite me to your silent world show me the other side of sound a place where tranquil peace is found.
~~ Dedicated to a great world poet and friend Demetrios Trifiatis ~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/18/2021 2:25:00 PM
Such a lovely piece. I look forward to reading more of your work. Take Care, Jess :)
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Date: 8/18/2021 8:50:00 AM
Richard, Ephemeral and beautiful and magnetic. Yes I want to go to that silent world too. A simple touch is all it takes. Invite me to your silent world show me the other side of sound a place where tranquil peace is found. I love these words you have penned. Sending all good thoughts, Susan :)
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Date: 8/18/2021 1:51:00 AM
Just came here to see if you have posted any new poems Richard... Thank you for your recent comment on one of my poems... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 8/12/2021 6:34:00 PM
hi, there, I don't find a new poem of yours to read, but thanks for reading and commenting to mine recently. Get going on some poems!
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Date: 8/9/2021 6:40:00 PM
Ah, I love the silence you created , well done :)
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Date: 8/8/2021 1:46:00 PM
Sometimes silence is much more meaningful than words…your depth of this concept is amazing, Richard. I see this received POTD, and we’ll deserved, too!
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Date: 8/4/2021 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Richard :)
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Date: 8/4/2021 1:06:00 AM
Wow! Richard, this is an awesome dedication to a brilliant and a wise poet:) congrats on POTD:)
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Date: 8/3/2021 6:27:00 PM
"Elo Quothy, this very fine poem reminds me of the picture "The Creation of Adam" were their fingers reach out to touch, once touched the connection is there with no words spoken, but, then all at once understood, a lovely tribute to Demetrios who I am sure will be more than honoured by your poem, and a well deserved POTD . . . : )
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Date: 8/2/2021 2:16:00 PM
wow, what an awesome dedication . You don't find too many this well written and amazing!!
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Date: 8/2/2021 6:25:00 AM
A place and person that is seldom found in todays selfish, crazy state of survival of the fittest. However, I do agree with what you so aptly and creatively are putting across to us - pure bliss to discover persons who can invite you into their serene world a place where tranquility reigns. Superb write my friend. A greatly deserved POTD, a real gem Richard. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/2/2021 5:56:00 AM
congratulations on this well deserved potd.
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Date: 8/1/2021 9:34:00 PM
Richard, congratulations on POTD with this. Demetrios will love it. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/1/2021 7:35:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece of work, Richard, that I must have missed reading before. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD!
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Date: 8/1/2021 7:10:00 PM
Silence is golden, in so many amazing ways. Emotions have a way of telling a story, no words are needed. I am lingering in your peace. Such a beautiful dedication to Demetrios. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:40:00 PM
How profound and moving, love the line 'show me the other side of sound' - congtatulations on POTD!
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Date: 8/1/2021 12:02:00 PM
- So beautifully written to our mutual friend, Richard - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/1/2021 10:35:00 AM
I'm dedicating this poem to a fine writer Demetrios Trifiatis. A truly gifted and honorable man; a poet's poet and friend. -QtR http://www.innerchildpress.com/demetrios-trifiatis.php
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Date: 8/1/2021 1:59:00 PM
A lovely tribute from one fine poet to another. Tom
Date: 8/1/2021 10:28:00 AM
Hi Richard , I’m just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day it was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/1/2021 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Richard! I do like the ebb and flow of the poem. It is so you! Panagiota
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Date: 8/1/2021 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day with this wonderful poem Richard. There is silence in poetry, you see, read, feel and hear the words in the silence of golden moments. Well done, Belle
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Date: 8/1/2021 8:47:00 AM
Richard, beautiful and soothing. I wanted to reach out for your hand and take you on a journey to my beautiful solitude. Congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 8/1/2021 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A creative story/write. In this busy world we all need silence from time to time. I love your line, "Invite me to your silent world." Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 8/1/2021 7:41:00 AM
'The world is deafening to me' -- wonderful line, Richard. With each passing year, I am aware of more and more noise that I successfully, so far, have been able to shut out. Silence is golden. Some say that it is a fence to (surrounding) wisdom. Congrats on POTD. Peace be with you, Gershon
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Date: 8/1/2021 6:49:00 AM
Beautifully written from the heart! It is so true that "the world is deafening". There are times I crave silence and solitude as much as I crave chocolate. Congrats on your POTD honor, Richard! Blessings, Kim M
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