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Silence dance with shadows

I watched as silence danced with shadows, Playing the melody sung by my mind. Its blanket covered the darkness— broken only by a ray of light through a crack in the cave wall. I groped through the dark toward the stone, but the gale was too thick for my arms to swim. I imagined a ghost whispering— yet only silence listened. Echoes, like thunder in a deep ocean, ricocheted fear like a trap set to spring. Ghosts rushed out from the corners they lurked— only for me to hear silence whisper: “Come out of there.” Its voice flowed like a river of serenity through a forest. I begged silence to stop its torment, but it had ears that could not hear. I tried to run, but a boulder blocked my path. Then I screamed. It was then I knew— the light coming through the crack was my father’s flashlight.

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Date: 5/31/2025 7:54:00 AM
The end is priceless. Silence can be peaceful or terrifying. Ghosts in our mind yet really it is just the silence with no ears to hear. Sometimes, we know, we hear in our minds to move forward, but we fear. A scream seems absurd once you realize it was only your father’s light seeking you out. So good! Another fave!
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 5/31/2025 8:06:00 AM
No way that my thanks can be well expressed enough to you. You are a real darl, Kim.

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