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Silence At Wake, Deafening

The silence was deafening As friends joined hands at wake, To remember Bob - better off dead Whose last days were hell on earth. His passing was cruel, but so kind. A bitter sweet end to his suffering. An open secret he wanted to die In dignity, no longer living dead. His last wish was that he could join hands In circle of friends at his wake. To say silent cheers for memories Of a half full glass of an awfully good life.

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Date: 9/9/2016 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win, great job.
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Date: 9/8/2016 1:47:00 AM
I've always loved the term the silence was deafening - really enjoyed your poem John congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2016 1:15:00 PM
I love this take on the contest John, great flow too... congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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