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Silence

When the words were intense
and the soul no longer 
conceded to comfort 
Thoughts got blind 
and the heart beats in tension 
Silence
*****
Absent are ardent 
words
an inability to fill gaps 
meanings suspended
seasons slowly stretching 
Silence
*****
A thin veil
hiding behind 
a thick weight 
suppressing many a 
sound
Silence
*****
Deeply delving into a void
seeking the significance 
of a still word
trying to explain an unexplained 
world 
Silence
*****
Observing, absorbing 
the aura of silence 
touching its vibrant 
presence 
perceivable, palpable
Silence 
*****
Pausing in peace
treasuring tranquillity 
allowing the soul
to such a state admire
sinking in a serene space
Silence

Copyright © Besma Riabi Dziri | Year Posted 2023

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Paul Bell Date: 2/11/2024 2:23:00 AM Wonder how many people pray for silence, then realise, silence can be your worse nightmare. Login to Reply

Aly Bahr Date: 12/19/2023 2:03:00 PM Truly beautiful Besma. Thank you for sharing. Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 10/6/2023 7:00:00 AM You've conveyed the many attributes of silence in a serene poem, Besma. Your thoughts on silence are soothing and encourage use to be comfortable in silence. I liked the repetition of the word silence for emphases. I'll be adding this poem to my FAVs list, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/20/2023 10:23:00 AM You are of remarkable humility and beauty Bill.. I highly appreciate your kind words and appreciative comments.. it is an honour and a tremendous delight to have you here. Thank you so much. God bless you. Best regards.

Maria Williams Date: 10/2/2023 6:27:00 AM What a wonderful write my dearest friend. There is a song , I'm sure you'd know it ,The Sound of Silence. Simon and Garfunkel. Love the opening line...'Hello darkness my old friend, I've come to talk with you again. ' Signifies that Silence is a space that the writers are comfortable with. Observing and absorbing all in the silence of true awareness. Outstanding write , and a fave for me. Love and hugs xxx Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/20/2023 10:20:00 AM We absorb songs, poetry, lyrics and music.. then in a sudden everything flows spontaneously as we bare heart and soul to avid readers.. dearest friend Maria, what an honour and immense joy always to have you here.. your words I deeply cherish.. thank you so much for your ongoing support and great encouragement.. I'm deeply grateful to you. Always a great pleasure reading your amazing poetry! God bless your beautiful soul. Love and hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2023 2:49:00 AM - Silence is really valuable, Besma ... a lovely poem for the heart and soul :) - hugs Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/20/2023 10:16:00 AM So kind of dear Anne-Lise for being here to honour and highly appreciate my humble words. Thank you so much. God bless you. Best regards.

Christina Bowring Date: 10/2/2023 1:50:00 AM Such a beautiful poem Besma. So well written and filled with delightful, tranquil thoughts. As they say, ‘silence is golden’ and so is your poem. I particularly love the last two stanzas,’ sinking in a serene space’. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/20/2023 10:14:00 AM That's my immense delight.. thank you so much for your appreciative comment that's an honour. Deeply humbled. God bless you. Best regards.

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/1/2023 11:24:00 PM Silence is something that brings forth a myriad spectrum of emotions.. Sometimes it's forced by the circumstances of life which ultimately leads to a turbulent situation when we oscillate in its ache.. But when we come to the terms of acceptance, it can give us the tranquil peace that we soulfully desire.Dear beautiful poetess, your words are full of so much depth and I can't help but admire the way in which you've deciphered such heartfelt feelings.You're a stunning poetess and I love this poem Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/20/2023 10:12:00 AM From a deep silence I raise my voice to a dear Hiya to thank you profusely for the honour of your visit and the depth and beauty of your feedback! Deeply humbled and grateful to you for the huge elation you generously poured into my heart.. always an immense pleasure to see and read you. God bless you. Best regards.

Tom Woody Date: 10/1/2023 2:00:00 PM Ahhh... the serenity of silence. Giving ourselves time to think and meditate. Of course, there is a time to speak up as well. Love your style Besma Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2023 2:43:00 PM We are truly blessed to experience the relief and peace of silence and the grace of speaking in words.. thank you so much, Tom for your appreciative words! You honour my humble poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Karen Jones Date: 10/1/2023 1:54:00 PM Besma this is beautifully written and thought provoking. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2023 2:34:00 PM Karen you are so kind to grant me such honouring visit and beautiful feedback.. thank you so much. God bless you . Best regards.

Sotto Poet Date: 10/1/2023 12:49:00 PM Dear Besma, your poem is truly captivating and exquisitely crafted. The theme of silence is explored in a profound manner, making it a true gem. As I grow older, I find myself drawn to quieter moments, and in this poem, I can feel a sense of wisdom emanating from the stillness. The imagery used is striking and the metaphors are skillfully woven, adding an extra layer of beauty to an already awe-inspiring piece. Your deep acumen of diction and impeccable word choices enhance the poem's quality. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2023 2:32:00 PM You filled my heart with a huge delight while reading your wonderful response to my humble words! So kind of you, dear Lasaad to gift me such honouring praise.. thank you so much for your graceful presence and great support! Always an immense pleasure to read your amazing and inspiring poetry.. God bless you. Best regards.

Silent One Date: 10/1/2023 12:40:00 PM There is so much power in silence, but we need to learn how to make the most of it.. it is never easy when silence is not a choice... but when it is you can tick all the points you made her.. a wonderful poem, your pen is always a blessing to this community.. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2023 2:18:00 PM And you are the one whose silence of wondrous Beauty and depth! Deeply humbled by your so kind and elating feedback.. thank you so much for being here, Silent One honouring and supporting my humble poetry.. God bless you. Best regards.

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/1/2023 12:24:00 PM The repeating sound of silence conveys your theme brilliantly, my friend. meanings suspended-- seasons slowly stretching --Silence Deeply delving into a void--seeking the significance--- A thin veil hiding behind a thick weight suppressing many a sound--Silence. A FAVE for how silence spoke through words, Besma. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2023 2:03:00 PM So much obliged to you dear Vijay for your wonderful and uplifting comment! Your visit is a huge delight and honour.. deeply grateful for your ongoing support and encouragement.. always looking forward to reading your amazing poetry! Thank you so much and God bless you. Best regards.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/1/2023 12:18:00 PM The sound of silence, a famous song and of great beauty like your poem. You capture the emotion of silence, as memories race in one's mind, and find a modicum of peace in the silence around. Noise tends to distract us. In silence, we capture tranquillity and serenity. Wonderful sentiments and emotions my friend. Many blessings. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2023 1:42:00 PM Your words are so profound, appreciative and kind, Victor.. deeply grateful for your honouring presence and great support.. always a tremendous delight to read your wonderful poetry! Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.