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Highway Speeding

highway speeding dusty spring sunrays unfurl ferns posted on May 20, 2018

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Date: 5/21/2018 10:13:00 PM
I wouldn't want to be speeding in the roads of Houston too many crazy people...
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Date: 5/21/2018 11:09:00 PM
Everything looks like it's speeding from the fern's perspective. LOL
Date: 5/21/2018 8:03:00 PM
so much can be seen on the sidelines of speed, better take it slow when it comes to beauty, Well done Line.
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Date: 5/21/2018 9:15:00 PM
LOL - the speed was more in relation to the stillness of the ferns.
Date: 5/21/2018 3:27:00 PM
Cool KU, Line!
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Date: 5/21/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 5/21/2018 9:11:00 AM
Line, I really appreciate the contrast brought by the last line of your Haiku. It's great xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/21/2018 6:48:00 AM
A lovely haiku Line...I feel like taking a drive lol...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/21/2018 9:16:00 PM
Beautiful driving weather these days. Thanks for your visit and comment, WW.
Date: 5/21/2018 5:52:00 AM
The weather is so lovely at the moment and this haiku is evident of it :)
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Date: 5/21/2018 9:16:00 PM
For sure. Thank you for your much appreciated visit.
Date: 5/21/2018 3:41:00 AM
Love the fine weather, like to put some beach boys on and feel even better. Lovely hakiu line. Tom
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Date: 5/21/2018 5:29:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Sending sunshine your way.
Date: 5/20/2018 9:16:00 PM
Line, I like the contrast between the slow unfurling of the ferns, and the speeding highway.
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Date: 5/20/2018 9:19:00 PM
Thanks, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment

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