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Highway Speeding

highway speeding
dusty spring sunrays
unfurl ferns



posted on May 20, 2018

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/21/2018 10:13:00 PM

I wouldn't want to be speeding in the roads of Houston too many crazy people...

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2018 11:09:00 PM

Everything looks like it's speeding from the fern's perspective. LOL

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/21/2018 8:03:00 PM

so much can be seen on the sidelines of speed, better take it slow when it comes to beauty, Well done Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2018 9:15:00 PM

LOL - the speed was more in relation to the stillness of the ferns.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2018 3:27:00 PM

Cool KU, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2018 9:15:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/21/2018 9:11:00 AM

Line, I really appreciate the contrast brought by the last line of your Haiku. It's great xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2018 9:15:00 PM

Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/21/2018 6:48:00 AM

A lovely haiku Line...I feel like taking a drive lol...love and light...^WW^

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2018 9:16:00 PM

Beautiful driving weather these days. Thanks for your visit and comment, WW.

Yazmin Malik

Date: 5/21/2018 5:52:00 AM

The weather is so lovely at the moment and this haiku is evident of it :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2018 9:16:00 PM

For sure. Thank you for your much appreciated visit.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/21/2018 3:41:00 AM

Love the fine weather, like to put some beach boys on and feel even better. Lovely hakiu line. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2018 5:29:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. Sending sunshine your way.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/20/2018 9:16:00 PM

Line, I like the contrast between the slow unfurling of the ferns, and the speeding highway.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2018 9:19:00 PM

Thanks, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment

Highway Speeding

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