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Sight Lines

the line between dark and light in blank space or outer space on the edge half closed black-lashed eyelids

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James Fraser

Date: 1/2/2012 7:34:00 AM

It's like being on the peripheral of somewhere, and on the edge of nowhere. Deep thinking required here "Head Mistress" have a wonderful and healthy 2012 Debbie - James :) xx

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/1/2012 11:12:00 AM

Hmm...interesting Debbie my kind'a write here.) you sure you haven't been keeping bad company..? "ha ha" and a very happy & joyous new year to your good self..!

Jack Horne

Date: 12/29/2011 2:02:00 PM

awesome write, Debs. Clever indeed. Thanks very much - loved your contest

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/28/2011 12:17:00 PM

Wow....I've read this several times...and I can read many meanings between the lines....(perhaps of my own creation???) But I love the whole idea of this kimo!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/28/2011 12:15:00 PM

Magnificent and creative description, Deb! You have a fabulous kimo here. I've been trying to call you with no success. Just want to be sure you had a merry Christmas, dear. Enjoy the holidays and best wishes for the coming new year! Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/28/2011 10:17:00 AM

I see a real serious message here, Debbie. awesome way to express. happy New Year. harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2011 7:49:00 PM

Hmmm, I saw Brian talk about an image of blank spaces in his blog today. I wonder if somehow your kimo is related to his comment! Love that last line of this one. Thanks for my place in your contest, Deb. LUv, Andrea

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/27/2011 2:41:00 PM

Happy new year Debbie. oxox love Anne-Lise

Tony Lane

Date: 12/27/2011 7:59:00 AM

I've been there.

Nancy Jones

Date: 12/26/2011 6:09:00 PM

umm. yeah. Debbie I'm battin' my eyes at this one, write on, right on!~N

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/26/2011 5:49:00 PM

This is quite the deep write Debbie! I really enjoyed the poem with it's great meaning within! Which would you like to see the light or the absence of light?! Depends on my mood and the situation I was in would I chose one or the other!! Awesome Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2011 4:37:00 PM

Interesting work..Sara