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Sigh Falls

sigh of love forms storms
groan and mourn storms in hurt heart 
tears splash on his toe 


Syllable count: 5/7/5 (Ref. howmanysyllbles.com)

*A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 28, 2020)

Dec. 23, 2020
Sencleri-limoku Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Jo Chamberlain Date: 1/1/2021 2:58:00 AM So descriptive in such few words. Congratulations on your winning placement. Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 1/1/2021 6:54:00 PM Thank you so much, Joanna, for the sweet comment and the congrats!!

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/31/2020 9:55:00 AM Congrats on this winner. I really like the picture. Sara Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 12/31/2020 7:00:00 PM Thank you so much, Sara, for this lovely comment!!

Ann Foster Date: 12/29/2020 10:25:00 AM Loads of second thoughts.. and hidden meaning. Love it. Ann Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 12/29/2020 2:21:00 PM Thank you so much, Ann, for wonderfully lovely comment!! Wish you a Happy New Year!!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/24/2020 6:56:00 PM I feel the emotion in this one, same as Constance did. yes, such expressive work. Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 12/24/2020 8:31:00 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!! Merry Christmas and happy holidays!!

Constance La France Date: 12/24/2020 1:20:00 PM Newton, deep and emotional, well done and Merry Christmas _Constance Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 12/24/2020 8:30:00 PM Thank you so much, Constance, for this impressively great comment!! Merry Christmas and happy holidays!!

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/24/2020 8:08:00 AM Very expressive and emotive work in this one. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 12/24/2020 8:30:00 PM Thank you so much, Sara, for this lovely comment! Wish you Merry Christmas!!

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/23/2020 5:09:00 PM 'Sigh of love' -- beautifully phrased, Newton! Season's Cheer, Gershon Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 12/23/2020 6:18:00 PM Thank you so much, Gershon, for this impressively great comment!! Happy Christmas and holidays!!