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she told me she was living with cancer not dying from it and she would beat it sometimes people don't realize the promises they are making when they make them worry is another side effect of dying she was a gift, a rare and fragile flower who gave me something important but all salvation is temporary part of me went with her when she died but more of her stayed with me as our stars have crossed the thing about pain is that it demands to be felt I tell myself to live my best life today because of her

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Date: 7/11/2014 6:52:00 PM
Love this, Betty...living with cancer not dying from it...great philosophy for the trials of life. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/11/2014 4:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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Date: 7/11/2014 6:40:00 AM
Yes, we have to be thankful for what we have; each new day is a gift. Much touched by your words: "she was living with cancer not dying from it". Congrats on your win, Betty. // paul
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Date: 7/10/2014 2:16:00 PM
Betty, such a beautiful tribute.. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/10/2014 11:21:00 AM
Betty :) Congratulations, on your fine win. Thanks for the support :) Enjoy my latest blog ""A True Friend"" if you'd like.... Love Linda
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Date: 6/21/2014 1:06:00 PM
Brought tears to my eyes..I love the line "that pain demands to be felt."..It sure does.. wonderful piece. Bg
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Date: 6/21/2014 12:13:00 PM
Betty this is such a beautiful tribute to a very brave person. I can relate to this so so much having visited a friend in hospice - she lived another 18 months she was an incredibly determined person. Cancer is a very big issue in my private life at the moment - life is tough but I am still smiling but i know i am going to lose someone very precious to this dreadful disease. Hugs Jan xxx
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