Side Effects

she told me she was living with cancer
not dying from it and she would beat it
sometimes people don't realize the promises
they are making when they make them
worry is another side effect of dying
she was a gift, a rare and fragile flower 
who gave me something important
but all salvation is temporary
part of me went with her when she died
but more of her stayed with me 
as our stars have crossed
the thing about pain is 
that it demands to be felt
I tell myself to live my best life today
because of her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Love this, Betty...living with cancer not dying from it...great philosophy for the trials of life. Congratulations.
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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July 11, 2014 at 6:40 AM
Yes, we have to be thankful for what we have; each new day is a gift. Much touched by your words: "she was living with cancer not dying from it". Congrats on your win, Betty. // paul
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July 10, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Betty, such a beautiful tribute.. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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July 10, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Betty :) Congratulations, on your fine win. Thanks for the support :) Enjoy my latest blog ""A True Friend"" if you'd like.... Love Linda
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June 21, 2014 at 1:06 PM
Brought tears to my eyes..I love the line "that pain demands to be felt."..It sure does.. wonderful piece. Bg
Allison Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 12:13 PM
Betty this is such a beautiful tribute to a very brave person. I can relate to this so so much having visited a friend in hospice - she lived another 18 months she was an incredibly determined person. Cancer is a very big issue in my private life at the moment - life is tough but I am still smiling but i know i am going to lose someone very precious to this dreadful disease. Hugs Jan xxx
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