Sickened

The gypsy moth’s nest clung like cotton candy, spun sugar; wet and weighty to the pendulous boughs, of white birch and maple a deadly adornment shrouding the forest in an air of decay. A miasma of atmosphere Muffled the morn; dampening the resolve mystifying the mundane multiplying the cloying scent of fallen leafs; solidifying the webs of moth and man unifying the monochrome scene.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/16/2009 3:04:00 AM
A delight to read and an interesting subject, this poem is vivid and vast ,it has immense vitality in these moments conveyed to me its reader.
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Date: 10/15/2009 11:29:00 AM
i have to agree with Yoni. . . i come up with a scene similar to what he described. though i dont find it creepy at all lol....and damn those gypsey moths...always stealing the life and fruit from my trees.... wonderful write. xo Raiin
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Date: 10/12/2009 6:20:00 AM
damn...pendulous boughs? adornment? miasma? monochrome? you must have scored high on the verbal SATs. You should really submit this one to a magazine, the descriptions are pretty dark and obscure and draw the reader into something they completely don't understand. The visual I have is of a forest completely covered in cobwebs....most creepy. L&L.
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Date: 10/10/2009 6:58:00 PM
nicely penned
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Date: 10/6/2009 10:45:00 AM
What images you conjure! Awesome, and deep! Your muse is highly inspired! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/6/2009 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Deborah for sharing this write with us today. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 8:01:00 PM
@.@ My brain feels floaty =) thanks a lot for the experience!!=)
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:24:00 PM
I can fee this down to my marrow! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/5/2009 2:51:00 PM
every few years we see this clinging on all the bluffside trees, very spooky!... jim
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:53:00 AM
A wonderful write Deborah! vivid my friend.
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:14:00 AM
Great verbs in this poem!! Nicely done. ~KC~
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Date: 10/5/2009 9:58:00 AM
This is an interesting piece. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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