Shyness

life was the grains of hope
that slipped through my fingers,
the chilling breath that scurried
around my afflicted mind.
I heard your whispers
through the telephone wires,
felt your coldness
through a pretentious world.
No sister, nor brother
to confide in,
not that anyone cared,
lonely days, lonely nights
where to drift through the burden
of one’s mind to that visionary
place, there, where one casts aside
reality and takes on an entity,
a power with the ability to right
all that is wrong, a sanctuary
that maroons the real world in
rampant arrogance, and it’s
populous totally ignorant
of what goes on,
in the heart of a lonely soul!

© Harry J Horsman  2000
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/8/2011 3:04:00 PM
Here is a very interesting one of yours I had missed seeing. I see it won in a contest. A big congratulations, Harry. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations Harry on your poem's placement in the top ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/14/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, harry
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Harry in John Heck's contest "Blink". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:22:00 AM
I could feel the sadness of your lonely heart. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/3/2010 3:11:00 PM
Very well written and stark lonliness in this one. congratulations Harry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:39:00 PM
Hi! Harry, what a beauty,when it comes to your writes. Sad and deep thoughts I feel the empiness at the end of your poem. A true an excellent way to enjoy and read your poem. The best of luck in the contest! Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/30/2010 7:30:00 PM
very nice write here! Perhaps being from "down under" you might have a bit of the Isles in you and be willing to write for my new contests? Sista's Bloody Sista's English, Scottish, Wales & Ireland dialect contest? Light & Love
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:19:00 AM
There are so many shy people who if you take the time and get to know are wonderful people but lonely people. My oldest son was very shy but his brother was the opposite. In the end it worked out. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/23/2010 7:39:00 AM
There are so many lonely people, Harry. If only we could all get together, we might find the happiness each person deserves. The world outside does seem cold when you remain a prisoner within your inability to reach out. Excellent entry for John's "Blink" contest, Harry. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:29:00 AM
well describes the loneliness I see in society today....alot of times we put the loneliness on ourselves by not reaching out to others.
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:08:00 AM
Hi Harry, my friend, This should become a winner! All the best for the contest!...Gert
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:42:00 PM
Harry, this is going to be a winner ...it made me sad..and I guess that was the point of this piece. BG
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