Shy

The lone leaf hides under the gray rock The bird peeks around the tall tree As the sun hides behind clouds The wind just a slight breeze Branches, slow motion Stars, not seen yet A soft sense Being Shy Heidi Sands 11/10/21

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/20/2021 7:33:00 PM

Love this! It reminds me in my younger years. Always that shy boy hiding behind the children in front of me when the teacher asks a question. Not that I didn't know the answer...jus that I was too shy to speak out (lol). Very nice, Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2021 7:07:00 AM

I am happy you love it. Thank you for your input. I appreciate your comments very much. I can understand. I still do not like speaking in front of a crowd lol :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/16/2021 11:01:00 AM

Well, they say curiosity killed the cat... :) Curious George

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2021 1:58:00 PM

True Gershon. I liked Curios George in childhood lol. Thank you :)

Deb M

Date: 11/13/2021 9:48:00 PM

Just beautiful Heidi. Debx

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2021 6:47:00 AM

Thank you Deb. I hope you have a great day :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2021 8:11:00 AM

I like how you did this one, Heidi, and the title fits perfectly. "Shy" prompted by the words: hide, peek, slight, slow, soft. Well done. ~ Best regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/13/2021 11:51:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul . I hope you have a nice weekend :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/12/2021 6:21:00 AM

this a clever observation and a clever write dear friend. This I have to fave. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/12/2021 6:27:00 AM

Thank you so much for considering it a Fave Jennifer. I appreciate your kindness and support, always. I hope all is well and you have a nice day today :) hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/11/2021 9:05:00 PM

Your words crafted a lovely Nonet, Heidi. I enjoyed It so much.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/12/2021 6:03:00 AM

I am happy to hear you enjoyed this Lasaad. Thank you very much :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/11/2021 8:06:00 PM

Nicely done!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/12/2021 6:03:00 AM

Thank you Kim . I hope you enjoy today :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/10/2021 5:19:00 PM

"A soft sense.. being shy" Awe, this thought makes me smile and blush, all at the same time. I like what you have created, Heidi. This is beautiful in every way. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/12/2021 6:02:00 AM

Thank you very much Brandy. I hope you have a nice day . Hugs :)