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Shut Me Up

The more you know, the more you disappear; True, it has always been this way, though I never learn No, I never learn to shut my mouth; to pause, And really listen to the erecting truth of your mind and heart Shut me up; show me your graceful ways, Show me how to dance with danger; how to awe the stranger, To calm the slippery snake, to nurture my dying faith Shut me up, and show me the way to your narrow gate Silence my temper in the cool breezes of your kiss For I am tired of wrestling with my playful ghouls, Crying out in pain as they test my every strength, Making me live the atrocities inflicted upon the multitude Inside my head….always inside my head Shut me up; squeeze out my whines and complaints Give me every reason to pause and enjoy life, To provoke the passerby in light-year wit, To use my power and make something of it The more you withdraw, the worst of me shows; This is a truth that even the outsider knows My lips remain sealed as my soul musters strength, Readying myself to change; to quiet these torments

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/6/2015 6:23:00 PM
You must love your own heart and soul no matter what. It is hard to do in the midst of the game of love when it is not proceeding as planned. I, for one, hope you continue to be the complex and revealing puzzle maker. The feelings you have are expressed wonderfully and are such a delight. If the person you are with is not aware of this, then they are hardly worthy of your affection. On the other hand, they might appear to be very attractive on the outside--ouch, ouch ouch, ouch!
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Date: 9/3/2015 1:13:00 AM
The time is nigh, to silence the parade of the knave and joker, to defeat doubt, and to know love's rout my Gothic Princess. A most seductive request...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/3/2015 1:32:00 AM
Thanks Justin...you are a sweet, loyal reader dear. ~Laura
Date: 9/2/2015 1:15:00 AM
You cast a spell as allways. Reminds me of Edie Brickell "chuck me in the shallow what's before I get in too deep". Nicely done. For someone who speaks so loud with pen we would never want to shut you up my dear! ~Kilmer
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/3/2015 1:25:00 AM
Hey Stephen... I thank you deeply for your sweet comments on my poetry. I've missed you around! I am glad you're doing okay, and I'll be reading your compositions soon. ~Laura
Date: 9/1/2015 3:41:00 PM
The flow of your excellence write draws the readers sense and acts to be cautious in every aspect.... A well and wise write.........A.M.
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Date: 9/1/2015 3:38:00 PM
The flow of your excellence write draws the readers sense and acts to be cautious in every aspect.... A well and wise write.........A.M.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/1/2015 8:41:00 PM
Double thanks for the sweet review, Afolabi!~Laura
Date: 9/1/2015 7:33:00 AM
Your subdued feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. Emile.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/1/2015 8:41:00 PM
It's nice to hear from you, Emile. Thanks for reading..~Laura
Date: 8/31/2015 1:04:00 AM
What a powerful write, dear Laura. You had me with the title and you kept me till the last anguished word. You write so well, my dear...with translucency. Sending hugs
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/31/2015 1:32:00 AM
Thanks Eileen! I treasure your sweet comments. Will be visiting your page soon : ) ~Laura

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