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Shrill Sweet Sadness

The teapot whistling on the stove reminded him of what had been in settled domesticity when they were only twenty-three. The baby crying in the crib the teapot whistling on the stove the way her apron hugged her hips the sparks that flew between their lips creating scenes of bliss and strife. And when she ceased to be his wife the teapot whistling on the stove was silenced, packed and stored away in hopes of coming better days with someone who would understand the poignant songs brewed deep within the teapot whistling on the stove.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/13/2011 2:03:00 PM
Enjoyed this journey in a teapot Nancy, a well presented- emotive-and reflective poem here..
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Date: 11/13/2011 1:50:00 PM
wonderful write ..Nancy..good luck in the contest.. just finished mine..posting later luv.,.,, thankxx for my win in Scrabble.. a game we luv to play at my home... appreciate the honor and place ... it was a fun write to create.. in the end.,it all comes down to luv and passion..oh..
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Date: 11/13/2011 12:59:00 PM
What a clever picture of domestic disharmony, my friend
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Date: 11/13/2011 8:48:00 AM
Wow,....there is a story here, that is sad, and made even more so, with the background of a baby crying....so much read between the lines. Great job, Nancy!
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